Hunter's Rapsody, by Brian37
Offline This is not an either or poem but a look into the future and how humanity will deal with the fact that we are not special.
Momma, just killed a deer
Put a bullet in it's side
Shot the arrow
For my pride
Momma
The earth is mine
And now I've gone and throne it all away
I see a poor deer
In the scope of a rifle
Urine on my cammies
Lured it to my site scope
Spare its life from
Star-vat-ion
Easy come easy go
Will you let it go
No no no no no no
So you think you can
Kill indefinately
So you think you can
Expand to no end
Yes Bambi, Yes Bambi
Just gotta get
Just gotta get
Another planet
Nothing really matters
Shakespeare always said
Life is but a flurry
And that is all we have.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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why does this have a rhythm like bohemian rhapsody
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that is the worst garbage i have ever read in my life. this is worse than the wedding poem at the end of Napoleon Dynamite. I would be embarrassed for you except I am just too disgusted.
... obviously have never read any of Brians other poems >.>
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that isn't poetry, unless a new style of poetry has begun called "keyboard diarrhea".
i think Brian37 must be a rare breed of troll. no one could be that tacky and tasteless. i need to read more of his stuff, even my wife was laughing in tears after reading that mold-covered vomit. and she has no sense of humor at all, she thought "superbad" was a horrible movie and never laughed or even cracked a smile.
ya, its a pity that mine is stolen song lyrics from an 80's metal band *cough*
Superbad IS a terrible movie...
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All "poetry" is vomit-inducing and disgusting. I know this is poetry because of that.
/my two cents.
Enlightened Atheist, Gaming God.
And? What, do you want a cookie? I posted it, and you read it. So? I could care less. I have to laugh when people think I am blind or that I am trying to be an expert or trying to impress people. Ha haha hahahhaha.
I am sooooo hurt.........I'm going to kill myself now.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Besides, no poet can be called a poet without a harsh critic to complain about.
Troll? HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHA
A little wet behind the ears and a little new to the movement aren't you?
This is my thearapy, nothing more. If it gets you a laugh, good. If you call it trash. Again, so what? But calling me a troll? lol.
I can ad homin too, "You're a doo doo head", "No, you are".
Your criticism of my poetry is one thing. Even the people I know and like call it garbage. But again, does not hurt my feelings.
"Troll" however, has to be separate and would go beyond my poetry. And that would have to do with posts outside the issue of this thread including other topics. Calling me a "troll" doesn't hurt my feelings either. But I DO take it seriously because that IS a serious accusation.
What would cause you to call me a "troll"? Because I don't sugar coat my position on deity belief? Because I won't let people dodge absurd claims?
OR, that when I do make a mistake or misinterpret something, I admit when I am wrong?
You obviously have not been on this board long enough to understand me. I'd suggest you spend more time here before you go making false accusations about people you don't know.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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I find it funny that people are taking my "poetry" more seriously than I am. I get paid millions if you didn't already know. I am up for a Nobel Prize too. (face in palm)
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
Check out my poetry here on Rational Responders Like my poetry thread on Facebook under Brian James Rational Poet, @Brianrrs37 on Twitter and my blog at www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog
Oh come one, thats not fair... you take time enough to think it up, type it out, and paste it! we do the same, with telling you how horrible it really is
(but i still stand by my point that this one is mildly better then previous "poems" possibly because i skimmed it even less then usual)
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of my laptop keyboard, as it will need it since I just sprayed a mouthful of Shiner out involuntarily and the keys will be quite sticky tomorrow once they dry.
Brian, The Arts: Poetry, Music, Comedy, etc... was created solely with you in mind. It's where you should put all your poetry... not general conversation. I've moved it. If you notice I also had previously put most of your poetry in this forum as well.
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while trying to sound like the lead singer of Crowbar (death metal band), and then tell me poetry sux. another good one is to read Emerson whilst emulating the Irish janitor from the Simpsons.
Well, I attempted to sing it ~ fun stuff
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i can just hear the "yyyyeeeeessss Bbbbaaammmmbbbbii!!!!!!!!!!!!"
when I get a little more drunk, I am going to have to look up some more of brian37 poetry if i can find it. there should be a superthread sticky type thing, or even a poetry challenge where people try to come up with something genuinely worse than "hunters rhapsody".
my comments have been pretty mean, and I would bet that he is probably a really good guy if I were to actually meet him, but poems are just not his forte. but I am glad that I have read at least one of them, it is different that is for sure.
One of the nicest guys in the world.
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She's just as bad as any other. Poetry sucks. I could go on a rant about it, but it would probably start a debate I have no interest in persuing. Just thinking about it is agitating.
Enlightened Atheist, Gaming God.
Despite the garbage I spew here, it might shock many that I have had a handful, over a 20 year period, that I would defend tooth and nail, this one not being one of them. I look at it like this, "just write it and have fun". I am not worried about impressing people, I just do it to "let it out".
And don't worry about "being mean". I have thicker skin than you think. I have to, I am a Washington Redskins fan.
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YOU TAKE THAT BACK! I am not nice. I am mean. I talked about the NFL without their permission!
(Note self: Did I think that or type it?)
You're making me blush........
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Fly butterfly, just fly
Don't cry
Some of us are meant to die.
and that is all I have for now.
To never jump
Never exposed
To never fail
Is to never grow
Delusional shelter
To always deny
Sometimes you sink
And sometimes you fly
Taboo taboo
Narscissistic ego through
The window of delusion
Is the armor of fools
Tinted by pride
In obtuse insistance
Only jesters looks out
With the thoughts of a prince
The crimson's thorns
Are twice the spectical
Covers emerald orbs
Already asleep
I didn't bite
The forbidden fruit
No witch tempted me
To write these words
I accept
That I am green
Never to claim
To be pristene
I never perched
Upon a lily pad
And never as such
Need to be kissed
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
Check out my poetry here on Rational Responders Like my poetry thread on Facebook under Brian James Rational Poet, @Brianrrs37 on Twitter and my blog at www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog