God(s) By Brian37 a poem

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God(s) By Brian37 a poem

God(s), By Brian37

You’re my bitch You’re my bitch

You must submit to me

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

You must do what I say

If you play with yourself

I will give you hell

If you dare expose a breast

The inferno you will go

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

No other will you claim

If you don’t swallow my cum

I will rape your kin

If you like another god

And don’t follow me

I will torment you forever

And I will shout with glee

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

IAnd you will recruit

You will sell them cookies

And give me all the loot

Don’t you question

My authority

I am the alpha male

Who likes to be on top

I have many names

All monotheistic

I pit the bulls in fights(pitbulls, cockfight)

Rigged by Abraham

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

I fool you with all books

I call it a Bible or Quran

You give each other dirty looks

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

I am not to blame

I can lay you all to waste

Yet you still kiss my feet

What a scam

I have created

To have you at my mercy

I am Allah, Yahwey, And Jesus

Wrapped up in absurdity

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

You buy everything I claim

From 72 virgins

Or dead dancing the jig

What a racket

I have to make a buck

Do I care about peace

I guess you’re out of luck

You could be

In any camp

Of the major three

I wouldn’t give a shit

If you disagree

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

If you kill that’s fine

For if it’s done in my name

I can never complain

The cleric and the Rabbi

And the Preacher too

Kiss some major ass

Over things they cant prove

You’re my bitch, you’re my bitch

And my army men

I’ll burn all these labels

Who don’t bow to my command

I’m not their bitch, I’m not their bitch

Because it is obvious to me

I don’t read comics

To find reality

 

(end note) "swallow my come" and "rape your kin"

Is metaphore for "Do what I say or else"

 

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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LOL!  Nice one.  It sounds

LOL!  Nice one.  It sounds a bit harsh, but you're pretty much paraphrasing religions that already exist. Laughing


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Yahweh will kill you with

Yahweh will kill you with death for that poem! As the interesting verse goes.. lol


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Andyy wrote: LOL! Nice

Andyy wrote:
LOL! Nice one. It sounds a bit harsh, but you're pretty much paraphrasing religions that already exist. Laughing

No, if the worst humanity has to deal with is this poem, they'd be sitting pretty.

Harsh is being a Jew in a Nazi death camp. Harsh is being an American soldier watching his buddies get blown up by IEDs. Harsh is being an Iraq 5 year old watching daddy and mommy get blown up or shot.

If any Muslim or Jew or Christian want to waste their time bitching about this poem, they have their heads up their ass and their priorities way out of wack.

I'd be far more worried about the state of humanity than a mere blasphemer. If the current state of the world is the best daddy can do, I am not impressed at all. 

 

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
Check out my poetry here on Rational Responders Like my poetry thread on Facebook under Brian James Rational Poet, @Brianrrs37 on Twitter and my blog at www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog