Poetry by Brian37 (poems by an atheist)
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I have decided to edit this post because I do not like giving people the wrong impression. I cannot read Shakespeare to save my life. I just remember this one line from act 5 scene 5 and put my own spin on it. I've had to explain this over and over so here I decided to put that in this post so there is no more presuming what I know or don't know. But the plot of MacBeth is the old lesson, you can have everything and nothing at all at the same time. And how did all that cruelty serve you in the end? But I do not like play summeries calling him a Nihisist, because it is possible to not do what he did, and accept life as being finite, and sitll have morals without religion.
NEW EDIT 9/19/22 I got pissed at myself that I was scared to read MacBeth, so tonight, I forced myself to read it online. Now mind you, I did not understand it line for line, but basically Macbeth was an assdhole who murdered his way to the top, and did not believe the 3 witches prophcies. He murdered Duncan and had Banquo murdered. Banquo's ghost haunts Macbeth. And made the grave mistake of attacking McDuff's family and killing them(If I am reading this correctly) But Lady MacBeth has a guilty conscience and kills herself, upon finding out Macbeth basically says that life is not worth living and he should go down with a fight anyway, but refuses to fight Macduff face to face and Macduff kills him as the hero. ( I SERIOUSLY read the entire play every line, tonight. I even know where the famous line "double double, toil and trouble". comes from. The three witches, basically saying "look out Macbeth" your ass is in trouble.
So basically the moral of the play, don't be a fucking asshole when trying to get to the top, or "the bigger they are the harder they fall". Reminds me of the movie Scarface and all the shitty things Tony did to get to the top and all for not. But Sosa in that case was not a good guy either.
QUOTE WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE MACBETH:"To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Here is my spin on that wonderful and profound line:
Out, Out brief candle, By Brian37
To-deities, and to-gods, and to-God
Creeps in this petty tyrant from day to day
Until the extinction of humanity new ones will be invented
And all our yesterday's Gods have been created by fools
The way to tribal death. Out out brief myth
Claims are but a walking shadow, a poor reflection
That struts our narcissism upon the stage
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by the credulous, full of sound and fury
Signifying nothing.
(END)
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Max Factor's Sow, By Brian37
A message in a web
Wont save you
You are not
"Some pig"
The pin prick
Parlor Trick
Of the fake suicide
On the cross
Is moral bankruptcy
Like a stalker
With a gun to their head
"Look at what I did for you"
I didn't ask you to
And what right do you have
To tell me
Who to forgive?
And if I don't accept you
My fate is sealed
Without my input
Or consent
The message
In that vile web
Isn't that
Of a silent spider
It is of selfishness
And self glory
Taking away
My mind and rights
Charlotte did not
Ask for fame
In the story
She went away
No one knew
What she did
Nor did she seek
The spotlight
But you
You aren't even dead
According to your fans
You still promote yourself
Doing the right thing
Is doing it
Even when
You get no recognition
"Look at me, look at me"
"I suffered for you"
But if you don't kiss my ass
I will torture you.
Charlotte has morals
And sought no personal fame
She wasn't promoting herself
Or making threats to follow her
If I chose to follow
That should be my choice
If I chose to forgive
That should be my choice
But to follow me
And shoot yourself
Is sick
A mental disease
And even after that
You don't stop there
You threaten me
If I leave
There are much better morals
In that children's book
Than in
That vile myth
"I love you"
That is why I killed myself
But if you try to leave me
I will kill you too.
Jesus is the pig
With whore ruby red
Lipstick on his lips
Spewing vile threats
(end)
My friend Bob Spense put it aptly that the "sacrifice" story in the magical death of Jesus is immoral.
He is a third party who takes away your personal right to associate with others and decided for you without your permission who you forgive or don't forgive. He commits suicide to get attention, not to your plight or suffering, but for his own self promotion. And if you chose to leave him or not believe in him, he follows you and tortures you forever.
Bob equated the death story of Jesus as rightfully "lipstick on a pig". I quite agree and this poem is a reflection of that sentiment.
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Really? By Brian37
All powerful
Really?
Can you manipulate
Every atom in the universe?
Really?
If I took a shotgun
And blew my head off
Would it magically
Instantly grow back?
Really?
Lack of blood flow
A spear in the side
Complete organ death
One can survive?
Really?
Geologist be damned
In six days
Is the way
The bible says it happened
Really?
Conversations with serpents
Conversations with shrubs
And all I can think is
What year is this?
You still believe
Really?
Using your IPOD
And watching shuttles launch?
Really?
On the playground
It was ok
To play soldier
And cops and robbers
But you are grown
Do you really need
And invisible friend
To converse with?
Really?
And since when
Has suffering ceased
In human history
Through your pretending
Really?
You know it is fiction
You just deny
That this is it
All there is
Really.
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All This Time, By Brian37
I am to believe
By proxy of brand
That you have the answers
All others have missed
Volcano's once gods
Today you scoff
Yet a sky daddy
You still peddle
If I only knew
Of seventy two
If I only knew
Of of virtue so true
All this time
This mystery
That humans fight over
And create misery
All this time
It was a simple matter
Of picking the right team
Instead of searching for answers
I am glad I accepted
The sun and the moon
Being the separate sources
Of light we see,......oh wait
I am glad I forced
Women to cover
Accepting submission
To stroke our ego
It matters not
In the least
On ancient myth
On which I feast
The sun a god
Must be true
For popularity
In no dispute
All this time
I had it wrong
For wishful thinking
Is all it takes
I am right
Because I claim
A super hero
Will save the day
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This poem was a response to another poem someone posted on another website. It expressed agreement to our species all being the same.
AS A SEPARATE ISSUE, the first two lines of this poem are borrowed from a famous poem(don't know the artist) I am blasting the idea that one can "fight" death. It is a wishy washy claim. One can only look for ways to delay death or prevent certain things. But once someone is terminal it is futile to claim to be "fighting". Ultimately weather a quick death or slow death we still all die eventually. Found out that the line is from a Dylan Thomas poem.
Retort to Nightfall, By Brian37
"Rage against
The dying of the light"
Is a futile effort
In every sense
We are man
Yes we are
In our bluster
In our strife
In our conquests
We beat our chests
Build monuments
To our heros
Only to fall
To decay
Remembered by few
Replaced by others
And the future
What will we have
No mark, no monument
To our species
For of this rock
On which we ride
This so too
Also will die
Yes yes
We are man
We are the heros
We are the villains
And the paperus
In all it's forms
From marble to twitter
In which we record
Our complaints and beefs
Our sacrifice and needs
Our ultimate fate
Will end the same
And who will be
Around to hear
All of this
After it's done?
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Iran, Your Days Are Numbered, By Brian37
Look to the Pyramids
Look to the future
Neda is still there
And humanity remembers
You will not win
In your absolutes
Your tyranny
Is obsolete
Before it is to late
Give it up
Scorched earth policies
Will doom us all
Allah Akbar
Is what you claim
But of bloodshed
Is your harvest
How petty
This hero you claim
To put dissent
Before humanity
His biggest worry
According to you
Is to kiss his ass
Or suffer his wrath
Yet of 7 billion
All do need
Food and shelter
And love of friends
Your days are numbered
Of dictation
Death to tyrants
Of any kind
Free free humanity
Neda will win
And over your pettiness
Our species will prevail
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Genocide, By Brian37
The child cries
The child screams
The child dreams
The child has weapons
The sense of fair
Tossed aside
In the sandbox
Of selfish desires
Daddy promised me
This fictional utopia
I must defend his honor
To get my future reward
What ever it takes
Whom ever I kill
Is the blood
That must be shed
For it is mine
I am the chosen
I am special
In this 7 billion
I am the elite
I have the right
My book tells me
To continue to fight
I am the child
In the sandbox
Justifying horrors
At the expense of others
The final act
An orgy of violence
Daddy loves me best
Torture to the rest
Revenge is not corrective
Merely reflective
Of insecurity
And jealousy
The scorched earth
Is all you want
A fictional nipple
At the expense of the species
As long as you get
What you want
Who cares that genocide
Is the cost
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Mohammad is not Ali, Fortunately, By Brian37
In the land windmills
And clogs
Her uppercut to misogyny
Is much needed
Her butterfly looks
Hold the sting of truth
No superstition
Can take her punch
She scoffs at subission
And the idea of such
Well behaved women
Penned not in history
Not made of Clay
Yet of that substance
In order to end
Submission of women
This prophet they hail
Is neither the boxer
Or Ali
And pale in comparison
Their men are weak
Their religion old
And will fall
To women so bold
To muster her strength
Just a mere fraction
Is to free humanity
From tribal pasts
They will not win
Women have voices
And your old ways
Will not be tolerated
She always has
A mighty right cross
Truth is her fist
MUHAMMAD GOES DOWN!
(end)
This poem is an ode to one of my heros in Ayaan Hersi Ali.
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Eternal Narcissism, By Brian37
It is all about us
Ironically
About how we
Collectively
Fight and tussle
Thrash and slash
Blood to prove
Our rights of path
And all for what
An after life
That serves one
For humans to bow
Does this need a name
An ego stroked
To watch our division
For masturbation
For whom do we fight
A real being
A real boarder
Or our own selfish desires
The clock ticks
And death after death
Our toil and tussle
Is our own narcissism
Our fate the same
No matter the game
We shorten the ride
When we chose to divide
The chimp bares its teeth
The shark arches it's back
The hippo's tussle
To ward off competitors
And to what avail?
They rise and fail
Like every generation
In life's history
There is no mystery
There is no quarrel
Narcissism the enemy
That causes us harm
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Anthropomorphism, By Brian37
In early days
Of the sapient
Fear of earth
Made it god
Volcanos got mad
Shook them like fleas
Smothered them
Until they prayed
Angry clouds
Angry ocean
Incantations
To bring migration
Then the gods
Grew limbs and faces
Became like us
In more places
Compete they did
In the family of kings
Tribal super heros
Have arrived
To many to count
Akanaton tried to scale down
He made the sun
The one true god
Then the Zoroaster
Then the Jews
Do they really believe
This is something new?
Anthropomorphism
Even today
Makes the universe
A thinking being
Why do humans
Insist on a "who"
With magical powers
To provide protection
It is fingers crossed
It is lucky socks
Lucky numbers
With epic delusion
If horses had gods
Someone once said
We make up gods
And that is what is
Volcanos are not gods
And gods are not families
Cosmic dictators
Of monotheism
All of these
Are merely fiction
Of human desire
Of wanting protection
Anthropomorphism
Is the projection of
Human qualities
And superstition
There was no god
And never will be
No mater the conjured
Fantasy
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The Sitter, By Brian37
You go out
For the evening
And leave at home
Your toddler
In the hands
Of one who you pay
To protect
This precious life
But she Tweets
On her Blackberry
While toddler wonders
Finding poison in the kitchen
You come home
To find dead child
And the sitter says
It's not my fault
I can't interfere
It's not my place
The kid had a choice
That's why he's dead
I allowed it
To test you
To see if you would
Remain loyal to me
I can do what I want
That is my only promise
To you
I owe no explanation
You should be happy
That he's dead
A better place
Is his reward
Epicurus
Would fire me
And call me inept
Demanding my arrest
Holding credulity
In the face of this bankruptcy
You maintain the the staple
Of "faith"s fantasy
This is why
I get away with it
Why you wont fire me
Masterful ambiguity
I can demand
The mutilation
Of genitals
Calling it virtue
I watch you trapped
Underground
For months
And could have intervened
I watched
And did not stop
6 million cattle
Slaughtered by SS whims
And you still hire me
Because of my promise
Of fictional utopias
You so desperately want to believe
Call me next weekend
You have yet another
I will watch that one too
Trust me, I know what I'm doing.
If it suits my needs
I might, just might
Save that one
If I feel like it
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Sic Semper Utopia, By Brian37
Entropy screams out loud
At the whims of fraud
100% goes in
100% will not come out
Yet the utopia thinking
The scourge of thought
Leads the moth
To the light bulb
I am the driver
Do it my way
Do not question
It will be ok
Stalin's garden
Is as bloody
As the Inquisition
And Sharia Law
A man in a Palace
Protecting pedophiles
Claims the truth
From high above
Childish tribalism
Did not uncover
The truth of galaxies
Or Gamma rays
DNA has no politics
And cares not of our strife
Of whom we love
Or whom we hate
The universal
Is plain as day
That we are born
Only to die
Sic Semper Utopia
Perfection chased
Is futility
When all we have
Is humanity
Before is after
Both are the same
Atoms decay
And so too mythological claims
The lie of perfection
The futile utopia
Are the rants of tyrants
And insecurity
To be a Paine
Is to learn
To boldly question
Like Jefferson
To accept what is
And shades of gray
While seeking answers
Objectively
One species
Are we all
Give up on utopias
Lest we fall
(END)
This poem is a challenge to humanity to give up on the idea that we must dominate each other in order to lead humanity in the right direction.
Utopias do not exist and we must, in order to extend our finite ride, give up on the idea that we can rid ourselves of each other. We can, however, use the free market to compete with each other with our ideas and marginalize absurdity by allowing for the scrutiny of any and all claims.
We have given up on bad claims in the past. We have given up on the claim that the earth is flat. We no longer think that epilepsy is a demon possession. We no longer think the sun is a thinking being.
That is not to say that cant believe what they want. Human empathy should transcend all labels in the right to make any claim one wants. But equally important is the quality control of such claims to be subject to scrutiny and blasphemy.
Human empathy is not a utopia. It is the recognition that we are all individuals and ALL OF US are capable of the same range of human emotions and actions, both good and bad.
Part of that empathy is our individual desire to complain or even ridicule that which we don't like. I do it, you do it, everyone does it. Avoiding hearing things one doesn't like, via force of law is the quickest road to fascism, be it the likes of a theocracy like Iran, or the fascism of worship of the state like Stalin.
We only have one planet to live on. Clubs will exist and all of us flock to like minded people, that is normal and part of our social evolution.
Our priorities however, are backwards. While accepting that differences occur, we must not make those differences our priority, but our common interest that we all have family, we all want love and peace, and we all want to complain about things we don't like.
What makes us human are the things we have in common, not the artificial labels we set up. Maximizing peace is not done out of force or squash of
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Divine War, Crimson Credulity, By Brian37
The splatter
Of gray
Matters of bullets
Convey
Would they do the same
If it were Harry Potter
Or Star Wars hero
Luke Skywalker?
Would they impale
The enemy
Over blasphemy
If done in fictional name?
To arms to arms
Defend green eggs and ham
Crush all those to speak ill
Of our Candyland
Disembodied brains
Toil in our thoughts
Claims of super powers
Suffer human loss
Why cant they see
It is merely Dawkin's moth
Our crimson credulity
A catastrophic loss
Emerald weeds
Numbered by four
Are as equal
To claims of Thor
Yet we make no plots
Or policies
We do not kill
Over these absurdities
Please bury Santa
In his blood drenched suit
And his tactic of fear
Blinding all from truth
Finite is ok
It is reality
Nothing to die for
Is our only noble goal
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Paghman Gardens, By Brian37
In the land
Of the Taliban
Before their rule
There was hope
Is not the label
But mundane behavior
Theism stifles
Progress in humans
For every advance
Our species makes
Superstition's grip
Holds us back
This beautiful park
Blown apart, along with
Buddhist statues
In this same country
Islamic Dark Ages
Thus they are stuck
Oppression the law
Protecting their god
Stay or go
Misses the point
Superstition
Is the cause
To put tradition
Above human life
Just because
Some holds a belief
I am tired of
People pretending
Religion is good
And is not a weapon
Ask those burned
In Salem Mass
Ask the victims
Of the Inquisition
Ask the slaves
White Christians owned
Ask Native Americans
On the Trail of Tears
Martyrs are not heros
There is no such thing
They are merely bullies
Trying to claim
"Honor me"
Without question
Question not
My obsession
I fail not
To accept
Belief will happen
That I accept
But to avoid
Such destruction
Blasphemy laws
Must be questioned
Our civility
Cannot be built
On taboo laws
Of selfishness
To the Muslims
In the east
Lose your lust
Of forced submission
You will not get
Conformity
Nor that of
Civility
When all you do
Are make demands
That your god
Of all commands
Bullies are tyrants
History be damned
Christian's tyranny
Results the same
In our age
Of Facebook
You will not win
Blowing things up
There are those
Under your rule
Who will no longer
Be played the fool
There are those
In the East
Who really do
Want world peace
You will not win
In the age of Twitter
Of making threats
Of killing others
Far to many
Around the world
Are wise to the scam
Of theocratic power
What you can do
For yourself
Is to GROW THE FUCK UP
And move forward
Theocentric
Islam not be
Of 7 billion
And never was
Our species owes it
To this acceptance
To rid itself
Of childish tribalism
NOW TO ANY MUSLIM READING THIS, most in the west value the human right to believe what you want. BUT there is a huge difference between the right to hold a religion, and setting up a taboo where that religion can never be questioned.
A TABOO is a taboo, no mater who sets it up, be it Christians or a state such as China or the Former Soviet Union. TABOOS only piss off the outsider and minorties and create more human division.
THERE IS NO ALPHA MALE deity on a planet of 7 billion. OTHERWISE this pictures you see in that link create the garbage dump you prop up. If you don't want to be treated like human garbage, or live in a dump, then don't act like you deserve it.
http://www.atheistforums.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=33130 Scroll down to see what religion does to progress.
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Miss Piggy, By Brian37
A sign has gone up
At a grocery store
That of named
Wegmans
Call it Krogers
Or Food Lion
Stumped still
I am of it's logic
The sign says
That there are now
Special lines
For Muslim employees
If you have pork
Or alcohol
Please avoid
This employees line
But logic fails me
Because countless times
I pick up an item
And put it back
So if one arrives
Without pork or booze
How does this woman
Know they haven't touched it?
They'll hand her cash
Or a credit card
After touching
Those items
Our species eats meat
And always has
All sorts
All kinds
In reading Penn's book
"God No"
It was nice to know
A former Jew got it
After meeting Penn
They went out to eat
And the former Jew
Ate a bacon cheeseburger
Our species was around
Long before our current labels
No silly laws
Stop evolution
(end)
I just read a post on another website about a new politically correct rule going up at Wegmans super market.
HOW THE HELL do you enforce that? I touch all sorts of shit and put it back before I get to the line. Not to mention that our species has always eaten meat.
AND there was a case where a radio station was sued because of the death of a woman who participated in a radio contest "who could drink the most water"
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/16614865/ns/us_news-life/t/woman-dies-after-water-drinking-contest/
Under cooking pork can kill you. But so can drinking too much of ANYTHING in a short period of time.
I AM SORRY LADY, your vagina will not fall off if you handle pork.
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Virtue Of The Oppressed, By Brian37
Christian in
The coliseum
Persecution
Via death of lion
China's strong arm
Over Tibet
Buddhist monks
Burn themselves
Sunni's and Shiites
Do the same
Point the finger
And falsely claim
And the beef
In Ireland
Is no different
Than Palestine
It stems from
Our empathy
For the under dog
Forgetting the harm
Forgetting the harm
In evolution
When we finally win
We do the same
Virtue long term
Has no meaning
In a species
That keeps forgetting
We oppress
For the same reason
We don't want
To be oppressed
In group out group
Us vs them
The underdog
Can go on to be dangerous
The other guy
Always wrong
Is our mistake
When our past the same
DNA
Is what we have
Our wants and needs
Always transcend
Power shifts
Over time
Once on the bottom
We climb to the top
We climb to the top
And do the same
Often forgetting
What was done to us
The rational conclusion
We must all accept
To avoid the past
There can be no virtue of the oppressed.
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How Deities Are Born, By Brian37
No religion
Is revealed
Thy are invented
Merely marketed
Christians and Muslims
And even Hebrews
Fail to consider
Reality's truth
Projecting backwards
Is what they do
Pick up older writings
Inventing something new
Just as Coke
Makes a cherry soda
Pepsi sees that
And creates it's own
They talk of Prophets
Greeks had them too
Oracles by name
Apollo they proclaim
Yet no one today
Buys that god
Failing to realize
They believed just as fervently
The major three
Causing the most strife
Started in Canaan
In polytheism
Just like Frasier
Came from Cheers
Just like McDonalds
Competes with Burger King
And the reason
For all of this
From polytheism
To monotheism
Is very simple
Humans like sugar pills
We've always invented them
To placate our emotions
It is evolutions flaw
In our false perceptions
Gap filling for comfort
Is all we are doing
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Worship, By Brian37
The futile exercise
Of defaulting to emotions
Throwing pragmatism
Under the bus
In many forms
Thus it takes
To that of gods
And that of states
From politicians
To celebrities
To our parents
And our friends
To exalt
With out question
Can and does
Lead to destruction
The cruelty
Of evolution
Has us born
As mere sponges
Our heads get filled
With cultural memes
Grow up with hormones
Leading to division
Worship must die
And be replaced
With that of reason
And ability to question
The idea of perfect
Does not exist
No human is special
None ever were
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Ink, By Brian37
Not being one
For utopias
Merely
A suggestion
To our history
In all its strife
Consider the option
Of human life
Is it better
To use a quill
Than to break a limb
Which no one wants
Panzer tanks
And Roman ranks
Gods and states
Eventually fall
All this drama
And for what
To ignore
Our finite existence
Ink the cure
In place of sword
Common condition
All desire
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Sans Souci, By Brian37
He could
In his limo
Drive through
The ghetto
Thinking to himself
How cleaver he was
On his own
All by himself
Sans Souci
On his private jet
Flying over
The empty factories
Off to fronds
At the 18th hole
Gloating about
Becoming CEO
And his labor
Left to toil
No health care
No livable wage
How long
Can this sustain
Before he looses
His market base?
Sans Souci
He will not be
When no one can buy
What he sells
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Kony Island Jesus, By Brian37
Stop claiming
It isn't a weapon
Stop claiming
It doesn't cause harm
Tender ones
Forced sex slaves
Forced to slit
Their parents throats
Africa's Dark Age
Neo Witch Hunt
Same weapon
Different generation
It is
The reason
Gays are murdered
In Iran
It is the reason
Women to this day
Cannot vote
In Saudi Arabia
Little ones
In the grips
Of a madman
Who reads this book
And it's head character
Just as ruthless
Infanticide, genocide
Incest and slavery
My word
You need not take
At face
READ THE DAMNED THING!
If such horrors
Are to cease
In our progress
Holy books must be treated like weapons
I do not
Fool myself
In thinking
Religion will go away
But we need
Paine and Jefferson
To put a leash on it
To minimize the harm
Put the safety lock
On the trigger
Read your book
Without head in sand
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19 Hundred And 84 Animals, By Brian37
Winston's daily grind
Was solitary
The hole
Of every prison
Political propaganda
Kept him from his love
And the pigs on the farm
Fought for power
With double speak
Your walking limbs
Were a litmus test
Determined by numbers
Having 2,
The enemy
Having 4
All must fight
Orwell's message
Obvious
Blindly buying
Blindly following
Plato's utopia
In those books
Are what he warned of
When we don't question
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Suddenly Last Summer, By Brian47
The turtles
Laid eggs in the sand
Hatched they scramble
To the sea
To avoid
The swirling birds
So numerous
To block out the sun
They swoop down
Like rising suns
At Peril Harbor
They turn them over
Pecking their guts
The cruel reality
Sebastian's poem
Was his last
Carcass shells
Left after the feast
Rot in the cruel sun
Abandoned by mothers
Cathrine's witness
Drove her mad
How could we do this
To each other
To cure this bane
We must accept
That of reality
Instead of ignoring it
The doctor rightfully
Made her face
These evil birds
Eating the turtles
The sun not cruel
Nor the birds
Nor the mothers
Who abandon them
There is only
Imperfect life
Both good and bad
And human strife
But if one thing
Williams taught me
Is be yourself
Face adversity
Indictment surely
Of humanity
Feed we do
On human cruelty
(end)
This poem is an ode to Tennessee Williams and the play and movie "Suddenly Last Summer". I just watched it this morning. Ironically Williams hated it. I loved it. Hepburn's character was twisted and drew you in so deeply yoo hung on every word. Taylor too was awesome. The metaphor about the baby turtles on the beach as a metaphor being eaten REALLY IS the harsh reality of evolution and nature.
While this play was an emotional appeal to try to treat others better. I think the bigger message is in that trying to do that, we cant ignore reality, because by doing such we can and far to often do, in doing such, create more cruelty.
And more so today, I think older movies that depend on acting rather than special affects take far much more talent and depth than the quick fix action crap done on computers.
This has to be one of my top ten favorites of all time. Up there with Shindler's List, Malcolm X and Key Largo.
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Hostage, By Brian37
The phone rings
Inside the house
Blue and red lights
Outside
Sweating
And shaky
He picks up
The phone
The voice asks
"What are your demands
What will it take
For you to let them go"
The phone rings
Inside the bank
Sweaty and shaky
He answers the phone
Crouching in fear
Or prone face down
The victims think
Of their loved ones
Will they make it
Out of the house
Will they make it
Out of the bank
The Swat Team
Can only be reason
Aimed at a god
Who holds us hostage
Deities shake in fear
In the face of reason
Our mental placebos
Hold us hostage
Putting guns to heads
Is no way to rule
If they cannot leave
On their own
If they cant leave
And must obey
That all you are
Is a hostage taker
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The First Person, By Brian37
Ineptitude
In such words
We place false value
On
The first person
To demand a taboo
Was the first
To to react in violence
Words like tradition
Words like honor
Are bonds
Which stifle progress
In our history
Where progress
Was made
Someone dared to question
As Freud said
"The first person
To hurl and insult instead of a stone
Started civilization"
I am glad
Galileo insulted the church
I am glad Suffragettes
Insulted biblical men
I am glad blacks
Insulted white Christians
I am glad Ayaan
Insulted Islam
We are not children
This is no playground
Words do have meaning
But should not come to harm
Lead by example
Not by force
Lead through voice
Not through fists
No more taboos
No more honor
Lets just agree
To none come harm
It will allow us
To say what we want
Hurt feelings
Are better than death
I see no use
In modern age
To force people to like me
And only say nice things
But I do
See the same need
That all humans want
Freedom from fear
The world could have peace
Quite easily
If there were no weapons
Just middle fingers
If one is offended
Sure raise your voice
But remember that too
When you want to offend
We all like to bitch
To some degree
But we also want
To be free
Free from fear
Free from violence
Free from force
Submitting to others
Common law
The only way
Not common taboos
That only create
North Korea
Dont offend the state
Or that of Iran's
Don't pick on my god
All must be free
And able to vent
Lest fascism rise
In any form
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Halliburton Transplant, By Brian37
Our former VP
Was in need
Of a transplant
But did he wait?
Did the doctors do
The right thing
And make him wait
On the list?
Were those in need
Of lesser means
Without the power
He yielded?
Did Cheney
Get his wish
By proxy of money
By proxy of title?
(end)
For those who don't know former VP Dick Cheney got a heart transplant. I would love to think he got it the fair way on a list, but we are talking about the same party that wants health insurance companies to be the death panels because their attitude is "fuck you if you cant pay"
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Sic Semper Boxes, By Brian37
When we buy
Things like cars
There are many
Different colors and brands
When we play
Things like sports
There are many
Different games and teams
When we read
Things like books
There is everything
From biographies to fiction
But for some reason
Our tribalism
Needlessly persists
In politics and religion
A label
Is a horrible shortcut
Often not taking on
Claims as individual claims
One can be a Republican
And not like sports
One can be a Democrat
And own a gun
And personally
I know of
An atheist
Who is a Libertarian
Our Constitution
And Bill Of Rights
Was a recognition
Of such
We are not cliches
We are not labels
We are not one sport
Or one car, or one claim
We are individuals
Much more than
Simple pejoratives
We hurl at each other out of fear
We are humans first
Our issues as complex
As our entire species
We are not clones
We can collectively
Minimize our phobias
By putting the common
First, as our priority
Differences will happen
And we cannot avoid
But we must avoid
Boxes
Sic Semper Boxes
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Pruning Roses, By Brian37
On every stem
We seek to avoid
While amorous thoughts
Well in our heads
Pine and pine
Offerings we give
Ignoring the prick
Of cognitive dissonance
It is the thorn
That draws blood
It is the thorn
Humanity scoffs
It is the thorn
Of the finite
It is the thorn
Of ignorant plight
It is our refusal
To face reality
Roses die
Like all of life
It is a thorn
If one is to face
Give up on fantasy
Give up on myth
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Tyson, By Brian37
In the ring
In contemplation
Without tatoos
Or brawn
Took on a dog
Without gloves
With the admiration
Of this dog's discovery
The Mid West's files
Who put the dog
On the map
Held no umbrage
To Tyson's findings
That this dog
Was smaller
Than prior claimed
Scientists do box
As they should
It is how
We learn and grow
Tyson punched reality
And made Pluto
The rightful dwarf
It should be
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Popularity Clause, By Brian37
What if
Your dwellings
Were subject
To subjugation
In Tehran
This certainty
Is the life
Of non Shiites
But still yet so
Thus some falsely insist
That the greatest numbers
Are to be favored here
This false curry
Manufactured
And retrofitted
To claim a pecking order
Not such
Can this curry be found
In the words
Of written prudence
In that law
Signed on December 15
17 hundred
And 91
That is when
Jefferson's wall
Took form
At Madison's hand
Try as they do
With zealous fervor
To see words
That are not there
With such ease
The founders could have
Put quill to papyrus
And wrote "Christian" or "Jesus"
Not such the case
As all can see
There never was
A popularity clause
Ask Lieberman
Ask Keith Ellison
Ask Pete Stark
Ask all of them
Where would they be
If the intent of the founders
Was a litmus test
An oath to Jesus
Those non Christians
ARE citizens
And serve because
Insistence of neutrality
And beyond our boarders
What of humanity
Are we individuals
Or lemmings?
If not lemmings
Then that of law
Must reflect what is common
Not sectarian dogma
(end)
This poem is about the First Amendment and that it does not protect a label in the form of pecking orders based on popularity. There is no "popularity" protection in the First Amendment. It is basically an anti-trust law banning monopolies of power via the concept of neutrality.
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Cogito Ergo, By Brian37
Fog lifts
Dusty mist
Burned off
By scrutiny
Traditions
Die rightfully
The future here
Cogito ergo
Cogito ergo
I leave behind
The child's mind
Thoughts mature
He's not there
Cogito ergo
Material required
For thoughts to occur
Egyptians were wrong
Mount Olympus
Apollo too
Cogito ergo
Cogito ergo
Thus monotheism
Meets the same fate
Darwin won
Dawkins too
Because of them
Cogito ergo
All must do
The fog has lost
To scrutiny
Cogito ergo
Is my duty
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Regent University, By Brian37
His softball mantra
"Bring it on"
Wont debate
Face to face with scientists
Attacking Darwin
Is as futile
As claiming
The earth to be flat
Yet this money whore
Glory whore
Spews his nonsense
To keep power
He gives me
700 reasons
To bitch slap
His absurdities
It is a desperate act
Like that of Capone
When the tax man
Finally caught up with him
You lost Pat
The truth
Cannot be
Put back in the dark
When one sits
On a jury
In a murder case
They accept DNA
Science is why
We know
The solar system
Is heliocentric
Science is why
You can sell
Your steamy pile
Via microwave technology
Adenine, Guanine
Thymine, Cytosine
Back up
Darwin
Your dirt theory
Of poof logic
Is debunked garbage
Childish fantasy
You are a hack
A thorn to human progress
A lech and needless anchor
On discovery and advancement
(end)
This poem was inspired by the ass hat and enemy of science Pat Robertson.
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They Must Be Giant Homophobes, By Brian37
The Super Bowl winners
Of this year
Played not even
In proclaimed city
Ann Coulter
Rightfully predicted
If Cris Cristie did not enter
The presidential race
The right would lose
And they will
Rightfully
Because of bigotry
Because of Ann
Because of fear
That anything different
That does not conform
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Veracity, By Brian37
In my tender years
With the mind
Of a sponge
And full of fancy
My mother did
Once take me
To a nature film
In balcony theater
In it
A fawn was born
Profile
To the camera angle
So my impression
Was that birth
Happened
Falsely the same way
Armed with my senses
Of that film
I proudly proclaimed
My sudden knowledge
On the school bus
My peers just as ignorant
Started speaking
About sex
Of the two exits
In reality
Because of the profile
Camera angle
I proudly,
And falsely
Proclaimed with certainty
That birth
Took the same path
As that of such
In which we
Fertilize fields
I really thought
That the same path
Was that the same
Organs producing methane
You giggle now
At such innocence
Yet still far worse
Are the blood of the certain
I was corrected
By the bus driver
When she pointed to her crotch
And stated the truth
Yet in this world
With all our technology
Our myths override
Our ability to test
I was certain
As certain
As those
Who proclaim deities
Our senses
Unreliable
Our only guide
Is to challenge them
I was just a kid
It was not politics
It was not borders
It was not religion
If I can
Get that so wrong
What of thee above
To a much greater degree
If humans make claims
Of certainty, of certainty
Of politics, and deities
Of class and status and economies
I assert such
The label "adult"
Is nothing more
Than collection of years
Oh ,we do get wise
And also learn
But still seek
To dominate
Our patterns and placebos
In latter years
Do not change
Our secret desires
To be on top
To be right
Even when evidence
In our face, flies
Adults built pyramids
Isis still dead
Adults pray to Allah
And Jesus and Vishnu
What if
Upon the challenge
To my assertion
Of the wrong birth canal
What if
I had behaved
Like an adult
Who would have I killed?
(end)
This poem was about my own youth guessing, and a bad guess at that, on how I thought babies were born. Upon seeing a nature movie in a theater, I saw a baby deer being born. But the shot was profile, so I ended up falsely believing that babies came out of the ass. I made my proclamation on the school bus the next day, and was RIGHTFULLY laughed at. Religion is far worse because it teaches you to be satisfied with mere guesses, and it infects those guesses into politics and creates global division.
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Sic Semper 2.0, Death To Pedestals, By Brian37
Sic Semper Utopia
A poem I wrote
Now again
I expound upon
7 billion
Our planet has
To demand taboos
And think we are special
Our common law
Is all we have
Not our interests
In what we favor
I have no right
To say to you
I am special
By proxy of label
Pedestals are demands
Of insecurity
Ones based on
Ego and credulity
The morgues of humanity
Are filled with the chosen
The martyrs of nationalism
Political party and theocracy
And deaths call
Beats us all
In every province
In every state
In every country
All meet this fate
Of such
None will escape
Sic Semper pedestals
Question blind loyalty
To both
Church and state
Question China
And their abuse
Question Iran
And their theocracy
Question class warfare
Waged by the rich
Not the free market
Just it's monopoly
Jefferson Jefferson
Call from your grave
That no one is special
We all are the same
Sic Semper Pedestals
Through common law
We are all humans first
If we wish not to fall
I want our morgues empty
And no more plights
No more dogmas
Of any kind
Old age old age
The only real honor
Of our species
Worth fighting for
Sic Semper pedestals
Question with boldness
All taboos
That seek special status
Arms are arms
Legs are legs
Blood is blood
No mater where one lives
Sic Semper pedestals
Through reason and compassion
Through understanding
All human suffering
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Scoliosis, By Brian37
A huge beef
This entity has
With human behavior
And what we do bad
But what of what
I heard on the news
A black and white mammal
Who swims in a tank
What did it do
To curry neglect
To end up with such
A debilitating affect?
And what of my dog
Whom I had put down
Who suffered arthritis
No fault of it's own.
If PETA were god
Would it do the same?
Should animals suffer
If they cannot sin?
If such the case
When Vick did his bit
This entity watched
As the dogs were slaughtered
Marine biologists
Try to solve the problem
With a brace
Not a myth
No human or mammal
Nor blade of grass
Get harmed or protected
By fictitious gaps
This animal
Merely suffered
Flaws in evolution
Nothing more
(end)
I just wrote this poem after seeing a story on CNN, no link, just wrote this in response to the story. But I might have even gotten the mammal wrong, the story flew by fast, but the intent is still the same. It WAS a swimming mammal with scoliosis. The marine biologists built a rack to correct the curve in it's spine. They don't know if it will work, but that certainly is better than some superstitious prayer to a non existent god who doesn't even give a shit to care about an animal that had no choice in it's condition. So take the Killer Whale as poetic license if I got the animal wrong. Doesn't change the message in the poem.
Often we debate as atheists in terms of human existence, but what of the suffering of animals under this alleged beings watch? If we are to be held up to neglect standards to the pets and animals under our own control, what excuse would an all powerful god have?
The reality is that this mammal is just a victim of evolution. Vic hurt the dogs because humans are capable of doing harm to animals, much less other human beings. This is another indictment of the concept of an all loving all powerful god as a claim.
The bottom line is that neither the good or bad in life need a fictional super hero to explain. It becomes that much more absurd when you are talking about animals who have no capability of knowing better.
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This poem I wrote shortly after 9/11 back in 01. I read it at a Unitarian Church where I used to live and it got loud applause and cheers. While I have grown more cynical of religion and it's divisions, the them of the poem I still agree with that humanity was the victim in our tribalism that leads to such events. It also reflects the selfish nature of Christianity at the time that they falsely put forth the idea that only they were victims. The beauty of those towers and is not that religion exists, but in spite of religion, they stood as monuments that people of diversity could live in peace which is why the towers were aptly named "The World Trade Center". I consider this my best poem ever. A copy of it still sits in that church.
Ego Divinely Inspired, By Brian37
The Twin accordions,
Burned and crumbled like match sticks,
No longer playing the music,
Of the briefcase.
3,000 ways,
To say, "I hate you"
But on that day,
None of the quad-Kamikazes
Shouted "Bonsai"
But Allah had his say.
Yet the burning Bush,
In the Marlboro Mansion,
Prays 1600 times,
To guide the bombs,
That maim and kill,
Creating massive tombs.
Do they think,
They are back in school,
Swinging on monkey bars,
Bragging about the biceps
Of their origins?
Is this what humanity has been reduced to?
I don't remember,
Those accordions,
Ever playing monochromatic music,
Jesus, yet be,
The only Icon,
Displayed in their absence.
That day,
Is not the ulcer of Genesis,
Or the embarrassment of Mohammed,
It is the manifestation of shame,
That humanity doesn't listen,
To the music of the accordions.
One side attacks,
The other points the finger,
But no one listens to the screams,
The screams of history.
Stop!
It is not your day, Christians,
It is not your Jihad, Muslims.
It is your stupidity,
In claiming the monopoly,
Of self-righteousness.
Those accordions,
Played the music of desire,
Of those of the Mosque,
Those in the pew,
The music of the Yammica,
And long earlobes too.
The forecast that day,
Called for morning snow,
Each flake a fragment,
Of invoices, and resumes,
Of proposals, and payrolls.
This was a ticker tape parade,
Where loathing sat in the convertable,
Waving his fist maniacally at the by-standers,
Daring history to repeat itself.
Screaming of divine intervention.
And the burning Bush,
Responded in kind,
And prayed to his absolute,
Screaming for divine inspiration.
The memory of the music,
The accordions used to play,
Should not be lost in selfish idealism.
Demanding only one way.
Jesus was not the only victim,
Nor Bush, nor me,
The attack on the towers,
Was an attack on humanity.
The cross is the only,
Outlined in chalk,
Crime scene investigators,
Step over the corpses,
Of Yahweh and Allah,
Visnu and Buddha too.
The white cards,
Never marked their graves,
Ever to be photographed.
Still today,
We want Moore Religion,
Massive stones marking our territory,
Like a lion pissing on a bush,
And wonder why we are attacked.
You fools,
It's not the book you read,
It is your arrogance,
In loading the 3:57
And praying for divine guidance,
For the bullets to hit their mark,
So you can maintain your selfish status qoe.
I can give you nine hundred and eleven,
Reasons in human history,
Ego divinely inspired,
Will lead to the human pyre.
Or kin of past,
Or so we claim,
Have past discretions,
We're not to blame.
My index,
Is not aimed at you,
It is of lessons not learned,
Wisdom not earned.
Socrates was in those towers,
He too was a victim,
Made to drink the hemlock,
And jump from the accordion,
Grasping at the last notes of life.
Vainly clawing at the sky,
A victim of pantheistic zealots,
Ending in a gruesome thump.
Galileo too,
Crashed into the marble walls,
Numbering in five.
Because of the ego,
Of the cross,
The world is flat,
And I'm the boss.
Yet in modern day,
The accordions play,
Morbid notes of ego's say,
It will continue to our dismay.
Yes, it will continue,
Least religious ego,
Give up it's venue.
(end)
Note, "Moore" is judge Roy Moore who refused to have a monument of the 10 commandments removed from his court building.
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A Stone, By Brian37
I wish I were a stone,
Hard and enduring,
It doesn't blink,
Like me,
At the thought of snow.
I wish I were a stone,
Tough and firm,
It doesn't care,
Like me,
If mud soils it.
I wish I were a stone,
Unyielding to blows,
Unlike me,
It needs no defenses.
I am glad,
I am not a stone,
For a stone,
Does not care.
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This poem is about a guy named Stewart, whom I knew in a poetry group. At my first meeting back in 91 he criticized another poet, who's poem I loved. Art can only be subjective and this was my "fuck you", to him.
Free My Words, By Brian37
If you cannot see the colors
In a rainbow,
Then the rainbow has appeared
Has appeared in vain.
When I find my strength,
My energy does not come from you.
You say you are a mechanic,
But of troubles,
My car is free,
So of your services,
I do not need.
You consider me raw,
So you must be refined,
Elitist bastard!
Refined not so of you,
Just cluttered eyes,
That are nearly closed.
Rhythm is for songs,
Do we need rhythm,
To convey emotion?
Do you cry in couplets?
If a tear comes out square,
It is still a tear,
With as much beauty.
So tip your pinky,
Sip your tea of poems,
While I share the rainbow.
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This poem was my fancy a "what if" Jerry Falwell had debated Thomas Jefferson on the roll of government and religion, vs if I had debated Jefferson on the existence of any deity.
Boldness By Candle Light, By Brian37
They sat one night
By the candle light
Engaged in the important
Philosophical fight
Oh the blustery man
With book in hand
Shouts of tradition
In a magic land
Slamming fist on table
Accused of a label
Condemning us to hell
As the candle flickered
From the table's wake.
The echo's of Jerry's screams
Through Independence hall
Were not enough to convince
Dear Tom of his magical dreams
"Oh yes, Jesus did do good"
Tom responded
But of his birth he equated to Minerva
Leaving Jerry despondent
In a bellowing voice
With a furrowed brow
Jerry thumped his book
"If not a miracle, then how"?
Calmly Tom stated
"I like what he did
But of magic it not be
I also like the works
Of Plato and Socrates"
Jerry sat down
And put elbow on table
Fist to chin
To formulate his next question
He jumped up
In excitement
Shouting "Creator, divine providence
SEE SEE SEE, HERE'S THE EVIDENCE"
Tom rolled his eyes
And looked him in the face
Like a stern teacher, said
"Jesus is not our government's leader"
"Jerry, did you not head my warnings
In my letters to my friends?
History furnishes no example
Of a free civil society,
When the priests run rampant"
The waning wax as the candle burned
The theocrat's mind churned and churned
"I will have my way" Jerry thought to himself
Despite the objections of the master philosopher
Scratching his face in nervousness
Clinging to theocratic selfishness
Knowing he had no case
Trying to figure out how to have his say
Tom noticed the fear on his face
And tried to console him
In a comforting way
"I have no objection to your right to believe
Merely to religious pressures that any one group
Would conceive"
"Didn't I make it clear to all
Religious freedom is paramount
But of our government
No deity shall mount"
"Adams
My dear friend
Singed a treaty
Confirming this"
"Did you not read
The signer's plume
"No religious test"
Prevents theocratic doom"
Flustered and agitated
The Bush funder left
Thundering footsteps
Of selfishness
Tom had sent me a letter
Early in the day
Requesting my presence
At Monticello
I was looking forward
To meeting this infidel fellow
I knocked on the door
With anticipation
Wanting to thank him
For his "rule" of question
He opened the door
My eyes were a bright
Shaking his hand
With intellectual delight
"Brian" he smiled
"We're in for an interesting night"
He lead me to the table
Kindly offered me a seat
And in the spirit of debate
"I will leave you in defeat"
"Oh really, "I smiled
And retorted
"Not even of this deism
Has evidence ever supported"
"Brian, look around you
Are you nuts?
The complexity, the wonder
How could you not believe"
"Well" I asked sarcastically
"Did you not say yourself
Question with boldness
Or was that just lip service"?
He knew I had him on that
But did not back off
Of my denial he did scoff
I saw in him, what he saw in me
The braveness to reason
Without theocratic treason
As I tipped my glass
As a toast to him
The friendly debate
Left nothing to trim
"What about the paradox
Of god's omnipotence"
Tom responded
"That is the importance
How did all this happen
Without divine accordance?"
"Tom, I know you disagree
And that is ok
Nay, Zeus, Jesus, or Yahweh
In my opinion
Are rational explanations"
"I see your point
But I have to believe"
I responded
"And for your right
I will fight"
"Brian" He laughed
"You are a fool
But yea in agreement
Of this sacred rule"
"Our minds of this subject
Are matters alone
Of the individual
Void of theocratic throne"
The twilight long past
Of the debate we did feast
The blasphemous banter
No hate in the least
Consumed that night
Many a candle
Welcoming questioning
To get a handle
With no demands
Of absolutes
We agreed to protect
Our individual roots
The dawn had broken
We both had spoken
In agreement
No opinion a token.
(end)
NOW MIND YOU This poem is strictly about government neutrality AND the right to make any claim you want. But not all claims are equal, by proxy of utterence. So when I say "no opinion a token", I am strictly speaking about the governmental protection to make any claim you want. BUT that does not make the claim itself credible and I do have the right to question, even god claims.
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This following poem is my "what if" Mrs Vorhees from the Friday the 13th series had a bitch fest with Medea of the Greek play. I have to shorten the original title "The Art of Good Housekeeping PMS On The Couch".
The Art Of Good Housekeeping, By Brian37
One at a camp
A lake of Crystal
Sex while he drowned
Vengeance her missile
She picked them off
One by one
With arrow or axe
Defiled their fun
Medea
Long before
Crippled Jason
For making a whore
The comic book bible
On the waiting table
In Freud's office
I created this fable
In his room
Both awaited
The therapy session
Discussing reasons why they hated
"My son, my son"
Mrs V exclaimed
"They let him drown
Made him a clown"
To this Medea
Did so scoff
"Jason abandon me
And ran off"
"I had no choice
And every reason
To make him pay
To get even"
"I killed his wife
The King so too
And our kids
To tell him we're through"
The whistle of hot water
Piercing through her kettle
Killing your own kids
Made Mrs V unsettled
"WHY WHY WHY
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE"
"YOUR KIDS" She screamed
"WERE NOT PART OF HIS SCHEME"
Medea retorted
"Look who is bitching
You slaughtered others
Leaving limbs twitching"
"That's not the same
Mrs V did claim
"Of sex and drugs
All shall abstain"
"With every last breath
I did so for lesson
To teach the young ones
To avoid distraction"
"Oh on your horse, aimed so high
Your righteous virtue"
Medea laughed
"Don't make me cry"
Vesuvius
Was about to erupt
Contempt for Medea
Mrs V deemed corrupt
"How dare you compare
My pain to yours
You slaughtered innocence
Of that I abhor"
Both stood up
Face to face
Nose to nose
Defending their case
"Collateral damage"
Medea responded
"In the war of love
He left me despondent"
Medea not wanting
To take any blows
From Mrs Voorhees
A trap instead, she would throw
In a deceptively conciliatory voice
Medea stated
"I understand
You didn't like my choice"
Mrs V sat back down
Picked up a magazine
Crossed her legs
On fidgeting
Medea went on
To explain
"To let it go
Would have been insane"
While the pages
Mrs V was agitatedly flipping
Medea turned aside out of her view
For in poison, a peppermint she was dipping
Medea turned back
Smiled while offering the trap
"Cut me some slack
Perhaps you are right, I deserve the flap"
"It just makes no sense"
Mrs V queried, accepting the peppermint
"To kill your own kid
Is beyond my reason"
As she unwrapped it
It did crinkle
Upon her tongue
It started to tingle
She rolled it around
From cheek to cheek
Medea a waiting
For the poison to peak
With a muffle
In her voice
Mrs V conceded and nodded
"Maybe you had no choice"
The numbness began to set in
First her tongue, then her chin
Then the panic of realization
She knew her life was about to end
Nay would she ever let on
To Medea, she knew she was gone
"If I go down
I'll be strong"
"Would you kindly retrieve for me
On that counter over there that magazine"
Medea did so, not observing
The lamp that Mrs V was procuring
With a home run swing
And sharp crack
The scull of Medea
Gushed blood from the back
Both stammered and stumbled
In vile admiration both were humbled
The evil smiles and piercing glances
Reminded both of the end of Hamlet
They collapsed as they gasped
Smashing the table end ending this fable
In timeless imagination
The gory enable
(end)
I wrote this as an ode to the classics of ancient times that without, none of our modern culture could contain the monsters and bad guys the Stephen King types or the dreamers of the Friday the 13th characters would have happened.
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Subordinate, By Brian37
Hollow words
Are uttered
Honor and glory
And even of crime
Power and control
Are all we seek
Cooperative leading
Or via force
Seeking affirmation
Protecting the ego
Inventing reasons
To justify actions
We do so to give
And do so to harm
All to fill gaps
In our existence
We deny
That we want
Subordinates
To influence
We deny
We want dominance
We deny
It is about self
Subconscious
Our actions mostly
Seeking the same thing
Finding self, by harmony or hurt
To stop the harm
We must see range
We must see actions
Of being mundane
The motive the same
To be on top
Sense of control
To have power
It is why humans rape
It is why we invent
Labels of politics
And religion
Crime and compassion
Both lead by this
Politics and envy
Lack of food
Abused kids
Grow up to abuse
Abused generations
Grow up to abuse
Until we realize
Collectively
Our goal the same
Harm will repeat
It will take form
In violent crime
It will take form
In global war
When will we see
It is both nature and nurture
When will we see
Above not none are?
We are one species
And must give up
On ideas of subordinates
Or making clones of others
Crime must be seen
For what it is
Desperate acts
Or mental illness
We must see
Other nations
Not as nations
But of our own species
Until we do
Conflict will rise
Creating more poverty
Creating more crime
Creating more war
Because we collectively ignore
Evolution does not care
Who we are.
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Subordinate, By Brian37
Hollow words
Are uttered
Honor and glory
And even of crime
Power and control
Are all we seek
Cooperative leading
Or via force
Seeking affirmation
Protecting the ego
Inventing reasons
To justify actions
We do so to give
And do so to harm
All to fill gaps
In our existence
We deny
That we want
Subordinates
To influence
We deny
We want dominance
We deny
It is about self
Subconscious
Our actions mostly
Seeking the same thing
Finding self, by harmony or hurt
To stop the harm
We must see range
We must see actions
Of being mundane
The motive the same
To be on top
Sense of control
To have power
It is why humans rape
It is why we invent
Labels of politics
And religion
Crime and compassion
Both lead by this
Politics and envy
Lack of food
Abused kids
Grow up to abuse
Abused generations
Grow up to abuse
Until we realize
Collectively
Our goal the same
Harm will repeat
It will take form
In violent crime
It will take form
In global war
When will we see
It is both nature and nurture
When will we see
Above not none are?
We are one species
And must give up
On ideas of subordinates
Or making clones of others
Crime must be seen
For what it is
Desperate acts
Or mental illness
We must see
Other nations
Not as nations
But of our own species
Until we do
Conflict will rise
Creating more poverty
Creating more crime
Creating more war
Because we collectively ignore
Evolution does not care
Who we are.
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Godwin's Mao Contents, By Brian37
While Newt suggests
The purge of gambling
And even porn
With consenting adults
Some still today
Love to proclaim
That the godless
Can have no morals
It does not matter
Religion never left Russia
Nor the amount of pictures
Hitler is in with clergy
It matters not
To the ilk of this lot
That we can be good
Without a god
It is the desperate action
Of those without evidence
To demonize
Those who dare to question
I submit
Your proclaimed hero
Has the same attribute
To that of dictators
The rule by one
Who cannot be removed
Where you are the property
He can do with as he wills
You can bargain
In futility
But in the end
You cannot leave
We are not fascists
For simply saying
Your claims make no sense
And have no evidence
I value Vegas
And Playboy
I value your right
To make absurd claims
But you will not
Any longer
Get away
With your ignorant fodder
Hitler and Stalin
Mao and Po Pot
Were human garbage
Not reflecting us
To demonize questioning
Then to be consistent
Demonize Jefferson
For he too valued questioning
Your right to believe
Is not our issue
It is the credibility
Of what you utter
No more no more
Can you dodge with this
Childish fear mongering
No longer will work
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Mega Millions, By Brian37
The tally of a decade
Of those who get taken
By the poly mortis sickle
The jackpot 50 million
5 million a year
From young to old
Die from everything
From disaster, disease, hunger, old age, or war.
Thus the word
That of "Miracle"
Is the ignorant refrain
In selection bias and sample rate error
And the objection
Stated long ago
By Epicurus
Still holds true
If he is watching
And protecting
Then one can only conclude
He sucks at his job
5 million a year
50 million a decade
Stillborns to heart attacks
Cancer to car accidents
Gang murder
Bombs in war
And you dare to assert
A super hero?
How about
Some reason
How about
A little reality
That neither the good
Or bad in life
Need gap answers
Of superstitious strain
That which harms us
We try to avoid
We can only delay
But cant avoid
We are not
Nor ever were
The product of magic
Or folklore
4 billion years
Our home has existed
Always with violence
Always with death
Meteor strikes
And will again
It's molten core
So too will end
No magic needed
For good or bad
Its only been nature
When we die or survive.
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Time, By Brian37
Sadness
Can be all consuming
Disparity fuels
Depression
A force stands mighty
Unforgiving
Never changing
Ever moving
Though it can be and enemy
It is also a friend
To realize this
Is the only true weapon
If it is the only thing
To do
Look for the sun
To rise
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Now while this next poem is a bit cliche, I like the flow of it, and it IT IS OLD, it was when I was an agnostic theist. But it reflects my youthful pining of a woman I wanted to date and did date for a brief time. She was a redhead, like orange blond, with green eyes. She will never know I wrote a poem about her. I will type it exactly as I typed it back then.
The Peach Tree, By Brian37
The peach
with auburn hair,
The peach
with hazel eyes,
Smooth and tender,
is her skin,
A touch I would surmise.
So sweet,
is the sound,
of your voice,
Caressing my ears,
tempting my mind,
Fondling my soul.
Within the peach,
lies a vixen,
coaxing me,
with her nectar.
So little,
of this peach,
knowledge I do know,
So much,
Of this peach,
I wait for her
to show.
Dance with me peach,
dace with my soul,
no need of sheets,
To make this whole.
Find me peach,
let me search for you,
Predict only time will,
if this can be true.
The peach,
with auburn hair,
The peach,
with hazel eyes,
Let us take it,
as it goes,
to see what will arise.
Divine are so,
your branches,
on which I wish to climb.
Your leaves,
show your spirit,
bright, playful, green,
Shading other's worries,
caring you have seen.
Loose not,
the sight of the sun,
Expand your leaves,
to soak up the nourishing rays,
Raise your branches,
higher and higher,
Dig your roots,
Deeper and deeper.
Nourish others,
with your smile,
brighter than the sun,
Open your hazel eyes
So all should see them sparkle.
You are,
your own strength peach,
We are,
a minute in infinity,
I will cherish any minute,
that you spend with me.
(end)
Oh my raging hormones. She turned out to be a hypocondriac(sp) ended up dumping me in any case.
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What is it? By Brian37
A perfection,
An innovation,
A complex thing,
What is it?
A marvelous thing,
A mass produced thing,
An intricate thing,
What is it?
A flawed thing,
An old thing,
A simple thing,
What is it?
A hideous thing,
A mass produced thing,
An intricate thing,
What is it?
A human.
(end)
Another old one. Now in this poem I use the word "perfection". I no longer see humans as a "perfection", much less an innovation. so you can take that word now as people viewing our species as a "perfection", like I falsely wished when I wrote this. And you can view "innovation" to mean humans can and do invent things.
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I wrote this about the tv movie "The Burning Bed" a story based on real life woman who killed her abusive husband.
Violent Vows, By Brian37
"I love you"
Or so he said,
So she seeks affection
In his bed
Underneath
The affection and love
Is a beast
Seeking violence above.
"Marry me"
"Yes I will,
You are just the spirit
I want to kill"
So the vows exchange,
"With this ring
I thee wed'
"With this fist,
I thee tread"
Screams of terror
Ring out loud,
But there still is silence,
In the crowd.
Let us defuse
This dynamite,
Care for the hurt,
And end their fright.
(end)
Now while spousal abuse is far less tolerated, at least in the west, it still goes on. But in less developed countries and even women in Islam, still suffer at the hands of male bullies and sexist social norms. Unfortunately it still applies today.
I did change the last line today. It did read "and end this fight". It seems more appropriate to tell all women that love should not involve hitting and no man should be feared.
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This is another old poem. It describes waiting by the phone hoping for anyone to call me to comfort me after being dumped and the hope of the future. Again, foolish youth and hormones.
Waiting, By Brian37
An instrument
For communication
One line going out
No one to receive
The messages
That do arive
Bring no conformation
Or comfort
Left
Is a haunting symbol
Of a future
That wont happen
It is cold to the touch
Simulating sad emotions
The keys are a shadowy grey
With nurse white letters and numbers
An eerie sound
Will echo through my mind
Like a flatliner
When I am compelled to reach out
As do the seasons change
So will the device
That was once an adversary
And a new sound will emanate hope.
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