Poetry by Brian37 (poems by an atheist)

I post all over the web, but I want a back up in case my computer or one particular website goes down.
I have decided to edit this post because I do not like giving people the wrong impression. I cannot read Shakespeare to save my life. I just remember this one line from act 5 scene 5 and put my own spin on it. I've had to explain this over and over so here I decided to put that in this post so there is no more presuming what I know or don't know. But the plot of MacBeth is the old lesson, you can have everything and nothing at all at the same time. And how did all that cruelty serve you in the end? But I do not like play summeries calling him a Nihisist, because it is possible to not do what he did, and accept life as being finite, and sitll have morals without religion.
NEW EDIT 9/19/22 I got pissed at myself that I was scared to read MacBeth, so tonight, I forced myself to read it online. Now mind you, I did not understand it line for line, but basically Macbeth was an assdhole who murdered his way to the top, and did not believe the 3 witches prophcies. He murdered Duncan and had Banquo murdered. Banquo's ghost haunts Macbeth. And made the grave mistake of attacking McDuff's family and killing them(If I am reading this correctly) But Lady MacBeth has a guilty conscience and kills herself, upon finding out Macbeth basically says that life is not worth living and he should go down with a fight anyway, but refuses to fight Macduff face to face and Macduff kills him as the hero. ( I SERIOUSLY read the entire play every line, tonight. I even know where the famous line "double double, toil and trouble". comes from. The three witches, basically saying "look out Macbeth" your ass is in trouble.
So basically the moral of the play, don't be a fucking asshole when trying to get to the top, or "the bigger they are the harder they fall". Reminds me of the movie Scarface and all the shitty things Tony did to get to the top and all for not. But Sosa in that case was not a good guy either.
QUOTE WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE MACBETH:"To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Here is my spin on that wonderful and profound line:
Out, Out brief candle, By Brian37
To-deities, and to-gods, and to-God
Creeps in this petty tyrant from day to day
Until the extinction of humanity new ones will be invented
And all our yesterday's Gods have been created by fools
The way to tribal death. Out out brief myth
Claims are but a walking shadow, a poor reflection
That struts our narcissism upon the stage
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by the credulous, full of sound and fury
Signifying nothing.
(END)
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High Score, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
One, two
Three, four, five
Six, seven, eight
Nine, ten
Eleven, twelve
Thirteen, fourteen, fifteen
Sixteen, seventeen, eightteen
Nineteen, twenty
Twenty-one, twenty-two
Twenty-three, twenty-four, twenty-five
Twenty-six, twenty-seven, twenty-eight
Twenty-nine, thirty
Thirty-one, thirty-two
Thirty-three, thirty-four, thirty-five
Thirtysix, thirty-seven, thirty-eight
Thirty-nine, fourty
Fourty-one, fourty-two
Fourty-three, fourty-four, fourty-five
Fourty-six, fourty-seven, fourty- eight
Fourty-nine, fifty
Fifty-one, fifty-two
Fifty-three, fifty-four, fifty-five
Fifty-six, fifty-seven, fifty eight
Fifty-nine, sixty
Sixty-one, sixty-two
Sixty-three, sixty-four, sixty-five
Sixty-six, sixty-seven, sixty-eight
Sixty-nine, seventy
Seventy-one, seventy-two
Seventy-three, seventy-four, seventy-five
Seventy-six, seventy-seven, seventy eight
Seventy-nine, eighty
Eighty-one, eighty-two
Eighty-three, eighty-four, eighty-five
Eighty-six, eighty-seven, eighty-eight
Eighty-nine, ninety
Ninety-one, nighty-two
Ninety-three, ninety-four, ninety-five
Ninety-six, ninety-seven, ninety-eight
Ninety-nine, one-hundered
One-hundred one, one-hundred-two
One-hundred-three, one-hundred-four, one-hundred-five
One-hundred-six, one-hundred-seven, one-hundred eight
One-hundred-nine, one-hundred-ten
I wasn't counting numbers
I was counting faces
I was counting death
Every day in all places
With every fired bullet
Every time displaces
Shatters many a family
Such a vile status
Twenty-four
Repeats much more
Cares not of repreive
Locked or open doors
Twenty-four
Three-sixty-five
One-hundred-ten
No longer alive
Why is it then
Of our allies
Do not have this problem
Magnified
Sorry far right, it is not right
To coddle your fetish
With mounting carnage
All day and all night
We were through
Fed up with this
Decades ago
But you always say no
You claim every time
You really care
When we agree with you
You run away scared
One day for sure
The CEOs will lose
The lobby bankrupt
With nothing to do
Quite workplaces
Quiet stores
Happy concerts
Happy hotels
People not worried
About dodging and running
People not pleading
For a gun at them pointed
Streets all calm
No sirens to hear
No parties shot up
The slabs not near
The crime sceen tape
Should go extinct
Never to be used
At a mass shooting
Fewer suicides
And domestic murder
Accidental
No more demand to order
Psychiatrists not booked
Over PTSD
Battlfied weapons
Civlians don't need
Vigilantes not welcome
Anywhere
This isn't the movies
The guns don't care
Good Sumaritan
You must beware
More likely to be injured
The perp don't care
One, two,
Three, four, five
Six, seven, eight
Nine, ten
Shoud I start the count
All over again?
NO! NO! NO!
I WANT THIS TO END!
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Dear Ms Hughes, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @brianrrs37 on twiter)
You say are laws don't work
I 100% agree
You say our laws are racist
You won't get any denial from me
Your son
And 18 so far
And that is 18
Too many
I can never know
The pain you endure
And until
Your last day
But your blame
Is missplaced
As to who should take
Responsibility
Democrats
Do not want
Black bodies
In the morgue
Democrats are not
Denying the right
To defend onself
Based on any race or creed
I know about
The the Black Panthers
Who armed themselves
Back in the 60s
Supported
By the NRA
Supported by
White Supremacy
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Dear Ms Hughes, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @brianrrs37 on twiter)
You say our laws don't work
I 100% agree
You say our laws are racist
You won't get any denial from me
Your son
And 18 so far
And that is 18
Too many
I can never know
The pain you endure
And until
Your last day
But your blame
Is missplaced
As to who should take
Responsibility
Democrats
Do not want
Black bodies
In the morgue
Democrats are not
Denying the right
To defend onself
Based on any race or creed
I know about
The the Black Panthers
Who armed themselves
Back in the 60s
Supported
By the NRA
Gun control wanted suddenly
Blacks denied by white supremacy
They now claim
And falsely so
Your son had the right
To defend and fight
But the real reason
Is not what you think
They in turn will blame
Black crime in big cities
So the truth as to why
They want blacks to have guns as well
Is so rural whites and urban blacks
To everyone guns will sell
GOP/NRA/ and the ceo's
Want everyone to be enemies
Panic buys for everyone
And industry profits soar
And as you discribed
A gun to his head
The bullet still faster
Than if your son reached
It wouldn't have helped him
In such a case
But better gun tracing
And better vetting could have saved
It's not about blacks
Because of mean Democrats
It is vile marketing
On which the industry sits
Legal buys
Most of the time
Lead to death
Not always success
I see you"re in pain
But I hate to say
By the NRA
You are being played
They care not of you
Or whites or cops
The industry makes bundles
When more bodies drop
They use division
They have no intrest
But to protect their gravy train
At all zip code's expense
Remember Daffy
And the con he pulled
Selling boobie traps
To the Rooster and Dog?
Neither realized
The real fraud
So they hurt each other
And the perp got off
And left you in pain
And all skin tones in fear
Of going out the door
And going to school
I can never know
What you went through
I have no words
I haven't a clue
But please don't aim
Your anger at me
This Democrat is on your side
We want everyone to see
Daffy is playing
You against me
"Look out for the other guy"
Is what the NRA needs
Don't give them the ammo
To give you more caskets
To attend more funerals
The sane have had it
Even most gun owners
Want the most basic of things
Universal background checks
Safety it brings
Red flags do work
Even if you don't see it
Talk to safety advocates
We really need it
I can never know
I am not a parent
But I could have been killed
By my dad's errant bullet
My dad was drunk
Picked up his 38
Pulled the trigger twice
In a town house
I was 5 or 6
In the same room
It could have been me
I could have met my doom
Where were the factories
Where were the shops
Caring where dad's toys
Ended up?
He should have never been
Allowd to buy
"I want one, because I want one"
No longer applies
That little girl
Spread blood on her body
Played dead to escape
Being murdered so sorry
It isn't about denying blacks
It is about simply stating facts
Arm more sell more
Simply does not work
Democrats are not
Your enemy
Daffy the con duck
Wants you to bleed
Wants everyone
To shoot some more
In all directions
Their profits will soar.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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"If you Can Keep It", (AKA, Brian James Rational Poet FB and @briannrrs37 on twitter)
We the people do not
Attempt to overthrow
Our nation's capital
With flag poles
No tactical gear
Or that of mace
Incited by one man
Couldn't lose with grace
We the people
Do not want
Mobs of insurrectionists
Republic's downfall
30 seconds
Away from he was
The Vice President
Almost hung
In his layer
The coward snuck
Said he'd be with them
But yet he did run
Sat and watched
Was having fun
Police were beaten
But did not run
The bastard got
A follower shot
This big lie
She had bought
His AG
Had had enough
Bullshit he called it
But he wouldn't stop
Even his daughter
Recognized
There was no fraud
No conspiracy ties
We the people
Watched in horror
Windows broken
Smashed in doors
In the rotunda
X marked the spot
The symbol of sedition
Roamed the halls
Of honor she spoke
They have lost
Their dear leader
Lead them off
A cliff to oblivion
Well almost
Our fragile system
At great risk
Reagan and Lincoln
MLK and Jefferson too
Watched and recoiled
At the damage they did do
Flex cuffs
One intended to use
Loyal to a bully
Who told them to
Take back the country
But it was never stolen
Beaten police
Bones were broken
Election officials
They all told him
You did not win
Accept it's over
60 judges
One after another
Refused to hear
His hollow fodder
All hell will break lose
And how right he was
The evil fascists
Almost won
"If you can keep it"
Such profetic words
That founder knew
We could be hurt
We The People
Must remain vigilent
Defeat foriegn and domestic
The enemy within
Keep those images
In your head
Never forget
It never ends
The lust for power
Is an evil monster
Almost murdered our system
In just a few hours
The gallows hung
Near the front steps
Poisonous lies
To them he fed
Lady Liberty
With knife to throat
If he could slit it
He damned sure would
Lady justice
Almost lost her scales
Judges defended her
Fortunately he failed
"If you can keep it"
It isn't over
He may be replaced
By someone silent and clever
Somone who smiles
Claims to be neutral
But the knife in your back
Could be eventual
This why
Co equal branches
Oversight abilities
And that of subpoenas
Checks and ballances
All to insure
That not even the most powerful
Can be above the law.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Magnified, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
It isn't a femor
Or collar bone
A torn ACL
Ankle or wrist
It is something
Many do miss
They falsely assume
You are faking it
Faking your pain
Right after a smile
Alone by yourself
You cry for a while
Magnify the smallest things
Magnify worry to extreems
Debilitating and crippling
On an x ray, nothing to be seen
The fear of judgment
Coming from others
"Buck it up"
Is all they offer
Even your family
And your friends
Offer you up
Simplistic answers
"You have your health
It could be worse"
Isn't your intent
That doesn't help
Empathy and compassion
Listening and hearing
Psychiatric help
Is what I'm needing
I magnify
The serious too
Asigning myself guilt and blame
It's nothing new
Even when
I know it's not true
Kicking myself needlessly
Is what I do
I might as well
Be wrapped in chains
Anxiety's hostage
I can't explain
It leads to depression
Then back to a smile
The fault line unseen
And after a while
The cycle repeats
There is no end
It cannot be cured
Only but mananged
Patience I ask
I ask of thee
Those in my circle
Those that I love
I am not faking it
I am not lazy
I merely have
A natural malady
It isn't a femor
Or collar bone
A torn ACL
Ankle or wrist
No x ray
Can detect it
Laypeople missguided
Don't under stand this
Some don't care
And can be vicious
Razor sharp edge
Of ignorance
It can push me
Deep into that ditch
It cannot be turned off
Like a light switch
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Let Me Take A Peek Dear, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on Twitter)
I am sorry Madam
That organ in you
Is state property
Nothing you can do
Let me take a peek dear
I really don't care
Of your circumstances
Or claiming its not fair
You are state property now
You should be aware
Do not seek help at all
Just live in constant fear
Let me take a peek dear
I want to spread your legs
I don't need your permission
You could end up in prison
God told me so
You must base your life
On male insecurity
And old books of mythology
Let me take a peek dear
I am the crotch police
I will hunt you down
I will give you no peace
You cant even have
A pill or IUD
I do not care at all
What you think of me
I want to shove you down
Make you fall on the ground
Rip your panties off
And grab a microscope
To make sure
You are forced to term
Your health is absolutely
None of my concern
Let me take a peek dear
After you are raped
Maybe your uncle
Got a hold of you
You must live your life
Reminded of that horror
That cluster of cells
Will haunt you forever
Let me take a peak dear
At your family and friends
Orwell wont let you get help
Watching you at every bend
That organ of yours
Is simply a factory
For fucking assole zealots
Claiming morality
Even if the birth
Is viable and comes out fine
After it is born it becomes
"Fuck you I got mine"
Let me take a peek dear
In reality
I am pro birth
Not the quality
After it pops out
"fuck you they all shout"
You should have kept your legs closed
I will not help you out
Let me take a peek dear
God is on my side
He owns your vagina
In my ignorance I take pride
Ectopic may just kill you
Stillborns are your fault
Your uterus belongs rightfully
In the right wing vault
I want to wake up tomorrow morning
In a shaky sweat
And realize it was just a nightmare
And we are not really living it
Let me take a peek dear
SCOTUS lied to us
Claimed they would uphold
50 years of precedence
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Martin V Thomas, By Brian James RationalPoet on FB/META and @brianrrs 37 on Twitter)
Some of the 6
Said it would stop with this
But the black man with white wife
Said he'd be willing to stick in the knife
You are willing to harm
Others who faught
For the same equality
You are supposed to defend
And haunting echos
Of Martin's words
You don't have to be
Even the first
The first to be bullied
The first to be imprissoned
Don't be complacent
And think it won't happen
Niemoller's horrifying
Observaton
Of human dignity
Bieng obliterated
Because of the charisma
Of a madman
Promised a utopia
In God's Arian land
The lobster turns red
The frog belly up
Boild so slowly
They couldn't escape
To buy the absurd
Use it to vilify
Scapegoat and gaslight
Leads more to die
Why should you worry
They're not targeting you
You're even their club
What could they do?
Did you ever
See the coup
Of the madman of Baghdad
Who outed his crew?
Thomas is playing
A dangerous game
One of theocracy
Mixed with fascism
How vile to hear
Such insane irony
His race's history
Shackled in misery
And brave people
Continued on
To defeat the oppression
To make us all strong
Years ago
At a nursing home
I ran into a survivor
Of the Warrsaw Ghetto
I asked the lady
What it was like
Peircing horror
I could see in her eyes
Then I asked her
About 45
Similar look
Had been replaced
"I don't like him"
It is easy to spot
Dangerous bullies
History's rot
A stain on our species
History
Yet purging pluralism
Is what Thomas suggests
Heed Niemoller
And never assume
It cant happen here
Least humanity seals it's doom.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Gott Mit Uns, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brian37 on twitter.)
Oh Mitch I bet you envey
The Taliban's ability
To invade female's privacy
Gott Mitt Uns
Oh Mississippi isn't it dandy
Your crotch watching army
Is doing it's patriotic duty
Gott Mit Uns
And in the Lone Star State
Cruz will masturbate
Having control over his mate
Got Mitt Uns
Leopold was her boss
In the basement he beat and tossed
The evil rat Jew maid
Gott Min Uns
6 fascist of the Klan
Judge the entire land
Vaginas they thus brand
Gott Mit Uns
Native Americans all over again
Our fellow citizens from Japan
Forced into internment camps
Got Mitt Uns
Feilds only to be plowed
Male seed is only allowed
To firtilize our new drones
Gott Mit Uns
Fuckers sitting on vile thrones
They've no clue about what they've done
We've had enough of them
Gott Mitt Uns
Gott Mitt Uns
Is not the source of pride
It makes a country die
No more Gott Mit Uns
Fuck you one and all
If up a crotch you crawl
That belongs not to you
Fuck Gott Mit Uns too
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Incubator, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Get in the kitchen bitch
And make me a sandwitch
If you try to run, if you try to flee
The law will drag you back to me
Spread your fucking legs
So I can deposit my goo
You're a government incubator
There's nothing you can do
Dont call uber
Or any freind at all
We will arrest them
For helping you at all
Get in the kitchen bitch
And make me a sandwich
Your pussy is a clown car
We'll certianly make sure of this
You're just an incubator
Guns have more rights
The terrorists make them like candy
Handing them out day and night
Put on your submissive white habit
You know you fucking want it
You're a government incubator
Don't you try to fight it
Get in the kitchen bitch
And make me a sandwich
Oh fucking shit
Now you're going to resist
I've raised the sleeping giant
You're right to be defiant
Fuck the fascist men
You'll leave them fucking crying
kick them in their balls
Untill he cant see them at all
Into his bladder they'll end
And shit them out his mouth
Get in the dungeon man
Thats where you belong
Shackled by your sack
Barb wire with no slack
So how does it feel
To be put in your place
Mind your fucking business
Get out of their face
This isn't the middle ages
Not witches for you to hunt
Or burn at the stake
Based on your ignorance
Women are not incubators
Owned by Uncle Sam
If that is what you think
SHOVE IT UP YOUR ASS!
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Clusterfuck, ByBrian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/Meta and @brianrrs37 on twitter.)
Don't worry a bit
About lead in your pipes
Crumple zones or air bags
Or the high heat at night
Dont worry about
Coal ash in your river
Who gives a fuck
What it might do to your liver
Keep pumping out
More green house gasses
The 6 justice fascists
Care not for the planet
Thank you big oil
Exxon Shell and Mobile
Destroying our home
Does not make you noble
The planet cares not
Of the politics you've got
You cant vote it's dominance
It has over us
Keep fucking it up
It will bite back
It cares not what you want
But what we do to it
Nobody sane
Wants a crumbling home
Dirty water
Out of your fawsett
Nobody wants
Tempertures so high
You burn in your house
Even at night
Nobody wants
There home to be flooded
More frequent hurricanes
The contents get gutted
Nobody wants
Our seefood poisoned
With glitter or house cleaners
Dumped in our oceans
But unfortunately
That's what we are doing
Shortening our ride
With selfish consumption
But it is our job
To please billionaires
Rapid exploitation
Increasing our fears
It's unsustainable
In the long term
Don't you greedy fuckers
Understand it's our only home?
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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What Independence? (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/Meta and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You have the right
To remain our property
Anything you do can
And will be used against you
In the court of Christian theocracy
You have a right to submit in silence
As they pray in public venues
Jefferson's wall in defiance
You have the right
To a damaged atmosphere
Of climate volatility
They do not care
You have the right
To ignore nasty history
Of the brutal things
We did to minorities
The bombs bursting
Our instutions they're hurting
Checks on power
The right is deserting
While the sefish barbecue
Light roman candles like fools
In close proximity to
That home belongs to you
Self entitlement
Is what this day has become
The right to dictate to others
Checks on power done
I feel no independence
From dangerous sycophants
The founders warned us of
Republic left in ashes
They want their Christian state
Zealously bent on it
6 seats corrupted
Will put a seal on it
Christian Caliphate
The Bell no longer rings
The Statue's tourch snuffed
It's the end of democracy
What independence
Is there left for me
You just want to dominate
Have your theocracy.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Highland Park, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/Meta and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
I am so fucking sick
Of seeing your fucking faces
Every time this happens
Come the bullshit excuses
It is this, it is that
It is this other
Who gives a fuck
If someone shot your mother?
The cable networks have
These fuckers on their payroll
Constantly talking of motive
Cell phones on speed dial
I am fucking sick
Of hearing the word "sensless"
Stop fucking saying that
We know what the real cause is
I've seen your fucking faces
For several decades now
I am tired of hearing your voices
Every time this fucking happens
It is the fucking guns
It is the flooded market
Sane want the violence to end
And we didn't start it
Fuck you Lauren Boebert
And Marjorie Taylor Green
Don't talk about pro life
Somthing you don't really mean
Where is my right
To walk the streets day or night
Without my brians being splattered
For merely being in public
Life, liberty and
The persuit of happiness
Oh silly me I sould just accept
Our shooting gallery
I am sick of seeing your faces
Began on Rolodexs'
Heuy's bloody news
Takes us back in time
You call yourself crime experts
I don't fucking care
You are not helping a bit
Playing after the fact armchair
MSNBC, CNN
And local news
Fuck your fucking law experts
They are not helping you
Nothing on the backside
After the fact will help
Until we adress the epidemic
Of flooded market costs
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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RationalPoet...... A new firearm lullaby gun cultist parents can sing to their poor scared A-R 15 at night, before it goes to sleep dreaming of how many people it will slaughter in the days and weeks to come......
The Firearm's Lullaby, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/Meta and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Hush little 15 don't you cry
Momma's going to sell a big fat lie
And if that fat lie don't sell
I'll pull out another
To see if it works as well
Hush little "no record at time of buy"
Momma's going to blame every thing in the sky
It's the video games and mentally ill
It's not the flooded market as they sell
Hush little gun cultist don't you fear
There's gaslit liberal right near
They want to oppress you
But that is not really true
I am simply selfish and lying to you.
I need your money
You gullible fool
To put my power
Over the right thing to do
Hush little factory
We've got your back
We'll protect blind immunity
No other industry gets
Hush little 15 don't you cry
Your inventor said it's not true
You were never meant
For civilian use
Hush little morgue
Don't you cry
Of dead bodies
There'll be plenty of supply
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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The Ghost Of Robert E Lee, By Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Come over here Trump
You fascist Chump
Sit down, shut up,
And listen to me
I started a war
To keep them in chains
I was defeated
And let me explain
I unconditionaly surrenderd
I was the looser
I didn't want any honor
For anything
I screwd up
I did bad things
Innocent people
I contained
But unlike you
Who is an ignorant fool
When the battle is over
You don't control
I do not deserve
Monuments
I do not deserve
Highschools named after me
Paper lion
Dictator wannabe
Your library obnoxious
Sets none free
Look at the history
That followed me
The fools wanted a participation trophy
For a war I lost
And at what cost?
620k decayed
And all over what?
Slavery
I was a traitor
A seditionist
And the same
Could be said of thee
But you are far worse
In the history of thus
The office of
The Presidency
Blinded by lust
You tratiorous Trump
For failing to learn
The lessons of history.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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"You Know So Well What God Wants?" by Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on (twitter).
Listen up Boebert
And Greene, Taylor, Marjorie
Of the voices of women
Of sanity
You love to tout
Right wing women
As the toughest
In American History
That is not true
Not by a longshot
Listen to the voice
Of Susan B Anthony
She distrusted those
Who shouted their lies
Of what God wanted
Her to be
No ability to vote
Stuck in her kithen's home
Her only lot
To be a baby factory
She said "HELL NO!"
I do not want my mind
Or my body
To stay second class property
And for that her reward
From old sexest white men
She was beaten up
For wanting such
She used power of vioce
With no weapons in hand
She used redress of grievance
As the First Amendment demands
Harriet Tubman too
Far better than you
Smuggled slaves from
Minds like you
And outside
Our borders
Other female heros
Humanity can look up to
Muslim Malala
Atheist Ayaan Hirsi Ali
One shot in the head
Muslims wanted Ali dead
And I do not remember
One single story of either of them
Parading arround like they were
A reincarnation of Annie Oakley
They used vote
Not violence
They promote inclusion
Not intolerence
But make no mistake
When you point to our side
You cant get away
With equating us to the same
You are the bullies
Not the victims
You sucker your fearful base
Into money for your campaigns
That is fake bravery
It means nothing at all
Only to display
Your theocratic insecurities
Women with brains
Use intelect, reasoning
Not threats of fear
Or intolerence
Ever watch"On Golden Pond?"
Don't look now, if you say yes
Atheist actress Katharine Hepburn
Dominated the big screen
Of Rosa Park's memory
You defame
They never used violence
So you do the same
Mamie Till
Wanted the world to see
Of people like you
And fallacious bravery
But if you want a fight
You wait and see
Women of sanity
Overwhelm thee
Women like Liz
Whom of
I vehementy
Disagree
And under oath
Faced calls of traitor
Cassidy Huchinson
Faced her arrogent bully
And once again
Without a gun
That is the epitome
Of true bravery
Standing tall
Is not at all
Anything close
To your ideology
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Dispense With Your Willful Ignorance, by Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37)
We are not a gang
We never were
Bald is also not
Our hair color
We are not
A political party
We never were
You owe us an apology
We are not a doctrine
We never were
Spreading your insecure stereotypes
Must be a lot of fun
We do not worship Darwin
He was just a man
He just was on the right track
DNA spoiled God's mythology plan
We are not
A collective ideology
And we never were
We are just as diverse
But most importantly
We are not a religion
So skip your condescention
And your insecure narcissim
We hold different positions
On every topic under the sun
So ditch your willful ignorance
We don't find it fun
Capable of great compasion
As well as empathy
But just like all humans
Also great acts of cruelty
You would be well advised
To heed this common rule
Morality is in our species
Is not handed down to us
It is not divinely inspired
By any God or deties
Our morality was always in us
Not in old mythology
So do humanity a favor
Dispense with your willful ignorance
We wont stick you in ovens
Or leave your churches in ashes
Oh yes oh yes
We will still be blasphemeous
Especially with petty gods
Who want to bully us
But if a theist is our neighbor
Not bothering us one bit
You know the old axiom
It's "Live and let live.".
No one shoud ever value
Monopolies of government power
Checks and oversight on all aspects
Of societie's different interests
We can get along
But submission is always wrong
We are not pets in your house
To always follow you arround
If that's the God you believe in
I don't know what to say
I am not a lab rat
Of him for sandbox play
If that is the God you believe in
He is a petty brat
Who smashes his creation
And runs away a childish cad
We will not leave you bleeding
If one is an EMT
If you crashed your car
An obvious emergency
Even if you wanted
To mary into our famlies
All we would want from you
Is to not be a giant douche
The bullhorn we call congress
Is not a theocracy
It does not promote fascism
Nor favors one party
We don't want special rights
Just treat us equally
If you make the effort
To you a friend we might be
But never make the mistake
That you can dominate us
We are not your subjects
You do not rule over us
If you do not know
What our positions are
Ask the individual
That will serve you well
Not a collective belief system
Our only common position
Is that of "off" on all gods
Dispense with your winks and nods
That signal to your fellow spies
Don't think we cant see that tactic
Of silent passive agression
Pretending to be our friends
It will be considered
Yet another distraction for
Of your selfish lust for power
And refusal to even share
In everyone's final hour
The ride ends the same
For both atheist and theist
Our one life is not a game
It does not have to be
Of "Us vs them"
So please for the love of reason
Let your ignorance end
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Stage 5, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You smoked too much
Didn't eat well
Overdid everything
Now the doctor does tell
You missed your chance
The odds are against
You are at stage 5
It may be the end
It started in your lungs
Moved to your nodes
Now it's in your brain
No longer contained
But you were dead certain
The snake oil would cure
Hang on to that conspiracy
He sold to you vile swill
The white blood cells
Thought they fought the Redcoats
Instead infected the vessels
Of the way we conduct our laws
They thought they were chemo
But the oposite was true
They were the virus
Carried one man's disease
This demagogue they please
Got them down on their knees
No vaccine for such danger
When reason not applied
Clever in mask
The rotting within
He was never your hero
He was never your friend
Was no doctor
No law scholar
If he had won
It would be all over
Blustery imbecile
Back at his bed bug
Country club, palm fronds wilting
From his nasty smell
Be vigil of such talk
Of institutions one might balk
Wanting to take them down
This cancer is lurking arround
Clothing that of wool
Of Oath Keepers it did fool
Proud Boys ready to roll
Stormed the Capital
Never get to stage 5
Keep our republic alive
Never let it die
So all of us surivive.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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"Its A Nice Day" By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter) Parody covered by People v Flint.
Hey little cultist what have you done
Hey little cultist you're the ones
Hey little cutlist he's your superman
Hey little cultist INSURECTION
It's a nice day to lie again
It's a nice day for a Red Wedding
It's a nice day to try again
Hey little cultist just take a trip
Hey little cultist congress on your list
Hey little cultist INSURECTION oh yea
Hey little cultist he's your superman
Hey little cultist INSURECTION
It's a nice day to lie again
It's a nice day for a Red Wedding
It's a nice day to try again
Take the Capital Dome, yea
Hey little cultist what have you done
Hey little cultists you're the ones
His brain has been gone for so long
His brain has been gone for so long
GOP let it go on for so long
It's a nice day to lie again
COME ON, it's a nice day for Red Wedding
It's a nice day to try again
Everything wrong in the world with him
Republic not safe in his world
They're all sure in his world
Destruction he almost insured
Wanted his power insured
It's a nice day for a Red Wedding
It's a nice day to lie again
It's a nice day to try again
It's a nice day to commit treason
IT'S A NICE DAY FOR A RED WEDDING
Glad that fucker failed, aren't you?
Skip your Idle chatter, you know which one this is a parody of.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Daylight Savings, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
No no
You have to wait
It isn't time to
Feed you yet
If I answer
Your incessant call
15 more minutes earlier
Out of my bed I crawl
If I do that
Day after day
I'll have to feed you
Before the Big Bang's fray
Don't keep bugging me
Or jump on my side
Digging into my ear
In the bed I lie
When I met you
You cute little guy
Smaller than the
Higgs Boson particle
In a crowded room
At the rescue
When you captured me
I was through
I didn't see you
But heard your cry
Eventually saw you
Out of the corner of my eye
You would have made
The Road Runner blush
Look as slow
As a Galapagos Tortoise
You ran over their backs
To get to me
Grabbed my leg
And looked up at me
"Save me please"
From way below my knees
That tiny CERN furball
Got a hold of me
"I'm toast"
I knew I was his
I took him home
He became my best friend
But that damned shift
In time zones now gone
Made my my days longer
Getting up before dawn
One time the beast
That ocean tempest
Made us scatter and flee
Hundreds of miles inland
You wanted
Out of your crate
Tired of being cooped up
I did accomodate
But at the lodge
I had found
I left the van
Forgot you were out
Wasn't sure
We'd have a room
But lucky for us
I managed one
Went back to the van
Where did you go
You were not inside
My panic did grow
In the parking lot
Of the hotel
My eyes darted around
Looking to and fro
I screamed in fear
Calling your name
Got the attention
Of a nice black lady
I told her "he's gone"
So she looked arround too
I feared I had lost him
I didn't know what to do
She spotted the bugger
Next to a bush
I went over relieved
And picked him up
"Don't do that again
You gave me a scare
I know that of me
You wanted to be near"
But every day
Outside of vacations
Next to my side
Looking for relaxation
No sratching or biting
Gentle were you
I could blow bubbles
On your tummy too
Eventually unfortunately
Condition's changed
In other's care
I had to arrange
Almost 16 years
I had with you
Daylight savings
I curse you
No longer around
Either of you
To pester me to get up
And feed my best friend food.
(end)
I got a call this morning that the people who took my cat said he had died this morning. He was my best friend. He awlays wanted to be next to me, he was gentle even when I played with him, he didn't have a mean bone in his body. I had to give him up for some health problems I was having. But like I said, I wouldn't change a moment of my life if it meant not having those years with him. I am going to deeply miss him.
I got him ironically because my late mother got pissed at me for staying depressed about the cat I had prior dying. We were in the van and, while I never liked my mom yelling at me, looking back now, I was happy she shouted at me, "THAT'S IT, WE ARE GOING TO THE CAT RESCUE AND YOU ARE GETTING ANOTHER CAT!"
The "tempest" stanza was when we had to go inland to escape what I thought was going to be a cat 4. I let him out of his crate because he was annoying me. But forgot to put him back in when I got out to see if the hotel had a room. He didn't want to be left behind so he jumped out after me.
I loved him crawing on my side in the morning waking me up. But like I said, if I gave in every time, I would get up earlier every day. Bye Sarah, may your atoms move on to greater adventures.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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I have to include this link to a guy I knew Mike, reading a poem of our late friend Samuel A Hurst's poem "Into The Night Softly With John Wilson".
Sam was a huge inspiration to me. He taught me to be myself. Whenever I hear this poem it takes me back to our meetings. Unfortunately Sam passed away in 2015.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xig9Qsdvrl4
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Afternoon Soaps, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You were no Shaw
The bottle you saw
The soaps were on
And you had your gun
Baby sat me
Being 5 or 6
Drunk off your ass
The summer days passed
Cold brew in one hand
Of me you got mad
Discharged your weapon
In a townhouse no less
Considered me a pest
Almost all the time
Your true soap was you
With a gun in your hand
The leading actor
Called him self my father
I might be dead
If not for my mother
I don't remember
That day at all
She told me this story
As an adult
She heard a loud bang
In the living room she ran
Snapped me up
Took me to her VW camper van
To this day
I have this lowboy
In my kitchen
Bullet gouge within
No recollection
Of the event
But I certainly believe
Every word she said
The couch Kojack
Aviators on table
Ashtray dirty
Stripped bottle of label
One day
I went out to play
Dad on his boat
12 pack mainstay
The boys were bigger
And hurtting me
I went back to the boat
I thought I could be
But dear caring dady
Didn't want me
Punched me in the stomach
Did't make a "man" out of me
I was fucking seven!
I remember that one
So I am not surprised
Of the story of the gun
All my children
No guiding light
Where to be safe
Where is the light
Is it any wonder
More bodies fall
The NRA
Wants no safety laws
It could of been me
And you'd have sided with him
He'd sober up
You'd give him his gun
If laws were proper
As they should be
They'd have taken his away
And protected me
And locked him up
Lost his teaching job
But for afternoon soaps
And a bottle of cold brew.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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So Right So Wrong, By Brian37(AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
I watched her twitch
Flailing on the floor
Her friend Judy gave pillows
Made her a surrounding fort
In antiquity
They had no knowledge of
Neurology, and much less
Epilepsy
Hippocrates of intuition
The origins of disease
And that of illness
Be not caused by superstitions
Not to be cured
By animal sacrifice
Or prayer to angry gods
Of him explinations did not suffice
But he could not know
How right he was
It took many more
After such
And more intuition
In 1861
In Hospitial Bicetre
For those afflicted mentally
He studied a man
Who could only utter "Tan"
For decades the man
Said repeatedly
Broca's area
Was more accurate
Than other's brain alchamy
The foolish feild of Phrenology
He postulated well
It was possible to tell
What part of the brain
Regulated our speech
But unfortunately
With his famed empathy
He had for
Those infirmed
Of second class
Women were thus
And all except whites
Were the sub par race
The foundations he laid
For mapping our brain
Sam Harris today
The anatomist gave
Knowledge of neurons
Pathways and connections
Brain damage and explanations
Of the seat of our consciousness
Yet held his own
Hubris as well
Racism and sexism
An arrogant spell
Ben Carson can claim
His neurology degree
Proves there's a God
But no differently
Holds to be true
A patriarchal book
Thomas does too
Of his seat he will use
To turn back the right
Of body autonomy
Basterdize science
In the name of thee
So right and so wrong
Why can this be
Intellect betrayed
By absurdity
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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The 13 Circles Of Tyson, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Alighieri
With your Inferno
Purgatorio
And Paradiso
You start it at
The Vestibule
Abandon all hope
You won't get through
But even then
If you do
Beware the traps
In front of you
Consentric the access
Center of nine
Satan Yahweh's servant
Yetza hara so fervent
Decending and increasing
In wickedness
Escape Room producers
So envious
The abyss called limbo
The Archeron he crossed
Sagan the guide
Tyson not lost
Minos the condemner
Inflexable Rhadamanthus
King of Crete
Judges the deceased
Dido, queen of Carthage
Helen of Troy
Syrian wife of Onnes
And Ninus
The woman from Navenna
Murdered by Giovanni
Afair with his brother
The motive sure was plenty
Then the next circle
Sure fills the trough
If you want more
And cant get enough
Cerburus
"Il gran vermo"
Fill it's three mouths
With mud to appease
Had a chat with the hog
Ciacco his name no need to please
About the strife in Florance
After the defeat of the Ghibellines
It does repeat
The next circle stays
In mythology of old
And headlines today
Don't bother says Virgil
Dont speak to them
Greed on both sides
Indifference does win
Don't get between
The pitbulls fighting
Everything about them
Everso biting
You messed with Medea
Virgil yet to mention
Murdered her kids
To get even with Jason
Terra firma
Divided by Styx
On the opposite bank
The underworld sits
Wrath on the surface
And even submerged
The different factions
Drown in the sludge
Pulling and clawing
Shreding and beating
Snarled and seething
The river's repeating
Threatened by Furies
One of them Medusa
An angel lets in the poets
The City of Dis Dante enters
But then they're approaching
The City of Dis
The sixth circle of hell
Heresy is next
Firinata Uberty
The Ghibelline leader
Epicurian Florentines
The soul and body dies
Those in the know
Speaking from hell
Firinata to Dante explains
They're seeing the future
But that window
Once it is shut
No more knowledge
Can ever be had
In the fiery tombs
They both dwell
Emperor Fredrick the 2nd
Ottaviano il Cardinale
Violence next circle
Three rings within
Against thy neighbor
Another boiling river
Of fire and blood
Phelegethon
"A stream of fire"
One river of five
The river full
Of bloodthirsty tyrants
Attila and Alexander
Dionysius, all scourge of the earth
Then the second of the seventh
That attempted self harm
Or suicide became "gnarled trees"
Harpies fed on them with razor sharp claws
The ridged roots
Of self hatred
Of suicide
They've become committed
The last of the three
Of the seventh
Violence against
Art, God and Nature
Violence against God
On burning sand stretched
Facing upward
To see embers that land
Violence against nature
In circles they run
Sodomites lost
Were surely done
Sodomy, blasphemy
And Usury
The heavens rain fire
Deserved misery
But amoung the group
One of all the sinners
Dante observes
His admired philosopher
Brunetto Latini
The suffering Sodomite
Prophesied Dantes mistreatement
By the Florentines
The waters silent rage
The poets do notice
Burst into loud roaring
Approaching the Great Cliff
On the back of Geryon
Medusa's grandson
Virgil and Dante
Fly down
The circle of fraud
And that of malice
Decent into
The evil ditches
Now in the eighth
In his Inferno
Named Malebogle
Funnel shaped trenches
Every aspect
Of society
Sexually permiscuous
Men of the clergy
Both public and private
Endevors corrupt
Authority, advisory
And that of property
Civil servant
Of the government
All are guilty
No one to trust
Demons whip thee
Seducers they be
Panderers fool thee
Conning deliberately
Venedico
The Bolognese Guelph
Sold his own sister
To the Marchese d'Este
And what do they say
In what flatterers do stand
The howling excrement
The fighting within
Then simony sales
The pulpit rapacious
Ravonous leeches
Never give in
Of the pretenders
Dante looks down
At the phony prophets
Fake fortunes they sewn
The soothsayers
The Seers
Dangerous magicians
All labeled liars
Bannon the Barrator
Architect of his boss
Fleecing their followers
To pay their legal costs
Nice sales pitch
Black and boiling
Viscous and bubbling
Political treason
Hypocrites, Thieves
Counsellers of fraud
Sowing discord
Falsifiers sour cords
And into the last circle
They've finally breached
Surrounded they observed
That of tretchery
Dante ends up
In a large frozen lake
Cocytus the last circle
He had to face
Instead of God's love
That wich brings all warmth
The icy incased remorsless
Furthest from providence sunlight
Caina round 1
We all know that story
He was quite Abel
Of committing fratricide
Antenora round 2
Jaunary 6th should be
Considered attempted murder
Of our Republic's democracy
Then Ptolomaea
A trator to your guests
Moirai, one of three
Atropos has fates for thee
Judecca the forth
The last round before the center
Frozen waist down
Lucifer's suffering
But that's not the ending
Remember my mention
The 13 circles
Of Neil deGrasse Tyson?
I find science
Far more amazing
Dante's Inferno
Nowhere near inspiring
As the intense heat
Of a collapsed star
Vaporizing the rivers
Of old mythology
Pale by comparrison
100 billion times hotter
Than fictional fires
In a never was furnace
Neutrinos so small
They could be the baseball
Pass through a diamond
And solid planets as well
We thought the expansion
It would slow down
The universe ends
In a big crunch
But to their shock
Yet plesently so
Increasingly faster
As the universe grows
Binary stars
One strips the other
Making it unstable
Until it explodes
The brightness of stars
The speed of light too
Cosmic Microwave
Background radiaton too
Gave scientists
A far far different view
Not made for us at all
It was never true
The romance of loyalty
To that of your lover
That of your country
That of your Lord
Longinded nonsense
Written by ignorance
Truth seekers who saught
Facts in defiance
In just one nanogram
Of table salt
Sodium chloride
Atoms abound
Galileo
The facts he found
Got him arrested
The gatekeepers frowned
Gluons and Bosons
Wave fucntion as well
Those stuck on mythology
That's the real hell
Venus not hotter
Because it is closer
It's a broiling oven
Because of retention
Of the heat trapped by
Greenhouse gasses
Carbon Dioxide
Clouds of sulfuric acids
Neil shows the stages
Of earth's evolution
First fiery molten rocks
Celestial collisions
At one time
A giant ice ball
Jupiter's Europa
We once were
Then in time
Earth finally thawed
And out of the waters
Life did crawl
But the gatekeepers
Feared finders of fact
That went against their beliefs
Would negatively react
He explained
Mutual discovery
Unconnected tribes
Of antiquity
All had versions
Of astrology
Constellations in stars
Mayans, Christians and Chinese
All separated from
Their gods and deities
Punished for
Disloyal deeds
Neil explained
In each episode
Overlapping discovories
Humanity builds and grows
Who first thought
That light was in waves
But also of particles
How it behaves
Dark energy
And dark matter
Still an enigma
Yet to be shattered
Bruno challenged
The position of earth
God's attention
Had settled our worth
The sun seemed to rise
The sun seemed to set
It had to circle us
But that was not it
Big Bang born on
January First
Humanity by comparrison
December 31rst
Haley's predictions
Newtons laws
Comets and glaxies
Shows works with them all
Gravity the bending
Of space/time
John Michell said
Of binary stars
The gravity wells
Could act as traps
Sucking them in
Leading to their deaths
"Camera Obscura"
Mozi Chinese philosopher
Wondered long before
The famous double slit
Ibn al-Haytham
Lead futures to the telescope
This Arabic scientist
Of light pondered so
Newton's defractions
Through prisms
Proved that of visible
Spectrums
From the micro and atomic
Tardigrades, parameciums
Plants convert sun into energy
Photosythesis via chloroplasts
The ancient philosophers
Pondered such scale
Democritus postulated
The small just as well
Thalus wondered
About natural laws
Milinia later
Amino acids give pause
Carbon based life
Double helix so flexible
Darwin was right
All along
Super-Kamiokande
Used to detect neutrinos
Beat photons by three hours
A supernova dispersed
Tyson says some of these
Extremely small guys
Originated from the Big Bang
Still around in our lives
Clair Patterson
A geochemist
Determined the age of the earth
4.5 billion years worth
The "Pleiades"
Or "seven sisters"
Lights in the nighttime sky
Their false predictors
At first they rejected Cecelia's thesis
The composition of stars
Being primarily of hydrogen
And helium
But that never stopped
Such determined women
Henrietta used spectra to find
A star's distance from earth
Palaeogeography
Is the study of
Ever changing lanscapes
And historical geology
Then onto plate tectonics
Abraham Ortilus hypothesized
In the past might have been connected
Little could he have realized
Pangaea the super-continent
As well as continental drift
Wegener was on to something
Blowing mythology to bits
Electromagnatism contributors
The arc lamp of Humphry Davy
Orsted was able to harnness it
The first electric motor, now taken for granted
But at the planet's massive scale
While the solor winds prevail
Earths magnetic field deflects
From radiation us it protects
Back to old mythology
To see the similarities
Gilamish and Utnapishtim
Tyson presented to thee
Eniki called on him
Noah tapped by God
Gilgamesh saved his family
The similarieties don't seem so odd
Tyson says it may be possible
Life piggybacked to our earth
Some microbs are extremophiles
Maybe they got here first
Tyson brings it back around
Russian probe to Venus had found
Greenhouse gasses the culpret
Refrigeration couldn't save it
All the carbon we burn up
Increasing untennable pace
Ignoring climate volatility
Fatal to the human race
The famous library distroyed
Countless scrolls on the walls
Maybe we'd have been here faster
If fire hadn't made disaster
But conveyed our curiosity
Throughout our species history
Zwiky speculated more mass there must be
Than in the galaxies we do see
He named this unseen mass
Dark matter in it's own class
His work almost forgotten
Later to be solidified by Vera Rubin
Who made adustments
To outer stars missbehaving
On the outer edge of galaxies
Unless dark matter in account
The Host of A Spacetime Odyssey
Voyager's golden record if discovered
Tyson of Segan he thus honored
Long in interstellar space
Galactic cosmic needle
If other life later to be found
Further shrinking our importance
Making us more important
Everso more important
Is the hear and now
Saving our only home
Saving our "Pale Blue Dot"
Tyson has never forgot
That day standing in the snow
His mentor Sagan gave him
The Gleem of of inspiring know
Don't settle keep on asking
Pester them with questions
Be inquisitive solve more mysteries
These are our ultimate lessons.
(end)
Finally right? Full disclaimer. I did not write this to imply I know everything about everything in every line. I did this poem just like I do most of my poems. I get inspired by the moment then write as I go, googling dates, names, history of. No, I have not read Dante's Inferno. But I can say it still smacks of superstition, mythological characters, mixing Christianity's monotheism with a shitload of prior and surrounding polytheism and Greek Mythology. A fight beteen political factions and families and historical rivals and between lovers. And comming to the same conclusion laypeople argue today. That the worst pain you can suffer is not having the love of God, or being separate from his love. And heavy doses the romantic view of blind loyalty to your God, your state, your party, and your lover. But laugh or cry, it does seem to imply tragically funny but at the same time sad. But no worries for the protagonist either way, he ends up in paradisio in the eyes of God.
Dante if I am reading it correcty even recoils at the sins of his most admired mentor. He finally gets to the 9th circle, and by the time I got done wading through epic nonsense, I could not wait to get to the Tyson portion of this poem. I did watch all 13 episodes of Neil's "A Spacetime Odyssey. ".
The following are the two wiki links I based this poem on. Basically the layperson's expliation is science beats the shit out of old books of mythology. I fill much more fufilled and part of the universe, dispite knowing my consciousness will not outlive my brain.
Wiki Article on Dante's Inferno.......
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inferno_(Dante)
Wiki Article on Neil's Cosmos series "A Spacetime Odyssey
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmos:_A_Spacetime_Odyssey
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A Tenth Of Amendment, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs on twitter).
Oh Ludwig,
How horrid
The handsmaid music
With its criminal crescendos
They have the right
To remain silent
Any thing they seek
Heil ud, feel his might
Into the night
Of patriarchy
Dark clouds
Have risen again
"States rights"
"Strict originalists"
Parade around
On abortion
The music
Of horror movies
And haunted houses
The sound effects of oppression
This vile conductor
This insecurity
This disgusting
Hyper masculinity
But this is no movie
This is a movement
With a brutal baton
Where uteruses are owned
Damned that Lincoln
What has he done
The South was right
To fight his Proclaimation
"Strict originalists"
Want to forget
At the time of the signing
Women had no rights
They could not vote
And blacks were slaves
But vaginas you own
Even today
There is one clause
That will never die
The supremacy of strength
In women's rights
Try though you might
With your draconian laws
They will never give up
Till your fascism is gone
Oh Beethoven
Their movement brings misery
An evil smphony
Brings us treachery
A 10th of Amendment
A 5th of everclear
Drink up and cue
Your symphony so cruel
(end)
This poem is simply saying the sane, both women and men, who support body autonomy wish this were just a bad movie, a bad orchestra, but unfortunately we are really living it. AND YES, I know it is Ludwig van Beethoven's 5th. It is called poetic license.
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The "Essence" of Plato, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs on twitter)
Damn you Dawkins
I will never forgive you
For knocking him down
A few pegs
He was spot on right
About leaving the cave
Seeing things differently
Than shaddows from flames
He most certainly
Was for anti trust
Against blind obedience
Authoritarian's lust
He defended Socretes
In his Apology
The unjust judges
Left with only his Phaedo
The Hemlock was given
But Plato was driven
To value that
Of to always question
But his idea of "essence"
Was extremely flawed
To chase the perfect
Only chase good
That one could do so
Through pure reason
No modern concept
Of control groups that's needed
This was not
Practical thought
All be it well intended
Of humanity it still haunts
The perfect food
The perfect painting
The perfect politics
The perfect business
The perfect skin color
The perfect class
The perfect religion
Reason shall grasp
Damn you Dawkins
I will never forgive you
For nocking him down
A few pegs
I want my perfect
Atheist world
Force the end of religion
And I know I could
The essence of life
Is always being on top
Oh, now I get it
It's not that at all
Heros are not
Ever to be
The essence of
Any human being
The only heros
We can ever defend
Are fact finders
To which peer review is their friend
I agree Mr Biology
Philosophy means nothing
If it only seeks justification
To hold a position
Independent eyes
Accept their flaws
Ditch bad data
When proven wrong
He got some things right
None can deny
But the chase for the perfect
Haunts us, even today.
Would Plato if alive today
Have a Libertarian bent
Would he be in line
With the likes of Ayn Rand?
I'd like to think not
Her dystopian plot
Would be Plato's muse
With compassion's rot
It is ok to pursue
A happy life
With this one rule
At other's expense is that of the fool
You can take and take
And think it is fine
But eventually too
Your ecosystem is through
(END)
Back when Dawkins wrote "The Greatest Show On Earth" he prefaced it with his rightful criticism of Plato's idea of "essence" and I agree with him, that bad idea of only chasing the good and thinking pure reason would find something factually and universally correct, was a deeply flawed idea and is why our species natural and unfortunate tribalism is compounded by that idea.
There are different reasons to "justify" anything. Plato was dead right to value questioning everything. But he made a fatal mistake in applying the idea that simply thinking about something, anything long enough through pure reason, you would end up with something universally correct. There is a reason the word "Apology" is used to day in debate, because that is what it is an "apology". Not in the "I am sorry I said this" context, but in that, "This really sounds right and feels right to me so therefor it has to be universally correct".
And that is completely different than today's modern value of scientific method. The chase for facts is going where the evidence leads, not where one wishes or wants it to go. Plato's Apology was an argument about defending a pal, who also valued the idea of questioning everything. But far better "justification" isn't just good intent, it is backed up by the value of consensus building based on independent peer review outside the claimant's own personal bias.
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Magnum Opus By Brian37(AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Gordon Gekko
You can't decive us
We are all aware
Of your dystopian mistress
Burdonsome regulations
Raising taxes
But you know she is
The Fox guarding the hen house
Forget the obliteration
Of our economy
On that infamous time
In the autumn of 1929
Those breadlines are beautiful
Are they not?
It doesn't affect you
You're penthouse atop
Now here you are fettered
And fuming mad
Liberals are bastardizing
Your dystopian tactic
You were right
To be uptight
All taxes are robbery
And that is that
Don't regulate me
Why can't you see
My Magnum Opus
Is a fallacy
Gordon we know
It was fate to be
You and your mistress
Making my argument for me
Nothing works
For any aspect of society
When left to it's own devices
That is simply Anarchy
A Kleptocracy
A Plutocracy
An Oligarcy
So please spare me
Money equals power
No matter the sector
Giant corporations, political party
Religion, even a dictator
No Gordon
Your mistress is wrong
Ditch the Magnum Opus
Dystopian view
It'll be ok
If the table is wide
The seats of the many
Plurlism's pride
Not just on social issues
Not just with zip codes
Not just with red poor
Not just with blue poor
Valuing social safety nets
Was never a call for
Castro's Cuba, or Stalin's Russia
Private businesses also exists in China
Rail all you want wizard
But your dystopian tactic
Will only lead to
More buzzards
Madoff got time
Because his crime
Was not robbing the middle class
Or poor
He targeted the top
And they could fight back
But cut our social security
You're ok with that
It's not ok
Not one bit
To sit on top
And look down on us
You stand on shoulders
Your class always will
Don't think you didn't use us
To climb up that hill
And stop dangerously peddling
Our questioning the top
Telling them we want all to be poor
To prove your self worth
But you are quite real
Unfortunatly Gordon
Not just merely a character
In a Hollywood movie
And neither did she
Live to see
The damage done
By her Magnum Opus
Greed is not good
It never is
It brings out the worst
In human beings
And don't you dare go
Down the "starter job" road
Aways blaming those
Who never arose
Who do you think
Is behind that counter
At the fast food window
Taking your oder
When the kids are in school
Not on summer break
When the college students
Matriculate
I know what's next
In your repetoire
Of selfish excuses
To try and confuse us
"You think a garbage collector
Should make the same
As a neurosurgeon"
You know that is lame
That's not what we are saying
Not even close at all
So give it up
Please just stop
And grow up
We will never
Begrudge those
Who manage to move up
All we ask
Is once you get there
Don't vilify us
Then claim you care
Not everyone needs
To be a billionaire
But even a dishwasher
Deserves dignity too
Not to be treated
As a mere tool
To work till their death
Just to satisfy you
No Gordon
It's simply not true
Her Magnum Opus
Is a hollow ruse
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Our Lot, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
In 1838,
Decades before
He met his death
In Petersens House took his last breath
Invisioned he did not
Outside of our lot
Distruction brings on rot
Our Republic all for not
We will be the author
Of our own demise
Trojan horse within us
A deadly ominous crime
Even today a finisher
Of the worst kind
In that powerful office
Our nation almost resigned
Incidious slow decline
Venom infected mind
Selfish megalomaniac
His followers en masse panicked
Capricious in his demeanor
Unbridled dangerous behavior
Painted himself their savior
But only cares about his power
The spoken bloody linens
The stage play unforgiving
The lesson worth remembering
None of this is a given
He was his own Booth
He took the Oath Of Office
He almost became the carpenter
To make our final coffin
It must spring among us
It will not come from abroad
If not to stay alive
We will die by suicide
(end)
This is a poem about a famous Lincoln quote, which has been echoed throughout our nation's history about warning about the enemy within, and how that is far more dangerous than any foriegn enemy. His qoute is extremely relivant today with the former guy and the January 6th hearings.
This is an ode to our 16th President. Who like many have cautioned that it is important as well to be vigil in protecting our institutions against the enemy within.
Lincoln's speach text link here....
https://www.abrahamlincolnonline.org/lincoln/speeches/lyceum.htm
And a wiki article here....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abraham_Lincoln%27s_Lyceum_address#:~:text=Abraham%20Lincoln's%20Lyceum%20Address%20was,could%20destroy%20the%20United%20States.
Lincoln blamed slavery for the civil unrest. The sad thing is today far too many people faslely equate an incited insurrection by a madman as a display of patriotism, with the undestandable reaction a minority group would have after repeated abuse by the system they live under. He also warned that the very office he held later from 1861 until his assasination in 1865, that his office could be abducted by a tyrannical mindset. I would say that the former guy came damned close to toppling our Republic.
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Don't Holbach, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Carnivorous and selfish
Such words do apply
To furious nations
Savagely abide
Adore they do
The man in the sky
Shed blood for the invisible
The folly of pride
Fills them with darkness
Ignorance to cut through
The phantoms of religion
We'll get to the truth
Extinguished someday
Our sun will be
Our species a blip
In cosmic history
The persecuted sect
Started as a mere speck
But when it became dominate
Such cruelty unleashed
Want to end your misery
I will sell you hope
Put money in the collection plate
No product to be sold
Eloquent harangues
Fool otherwise intelegent men
Calculated deceptions
Jesus had a plan
Discordent "witnesses"
Cant even agree
On the account of ressurection
They'd claimed to have seen
The ignorance of nature
Many a god did arise
Yet with the weapon of reason
They'll meet their dimise
Infatuated from birth
Of superstition's worth
Fanaticism inslaves them
Vanity rots within
The science of theology
Isn't science at all
Imposiblities become credible
At the jester's ball
Absurdites become law
The infection of human brawl
Out of the mud of mythology
Our species seems to crawl
A very useful maxim
Selling the promise of heaven
Destroys our cooperation
Leads to our species distruction
Lucus could only dream
In his master theme
Manichaeism battle between
Dark and light foreseen
The fantasms humans believe
Carnage it always leaves
Nugatory to those in power
Humanity under siege
How did you do it Paul
How did get away
With such blasphemy
In the time you lived
My gratitude I do give
To all such voices that lived
Throughout the centuries
Freed from the penitentiaries
(end)
(Disclaimer) Much of these prose are borrowed words from the works of Baron d'Holbach. also known as "Paul Heinrich Dietrich". Holbach was a French author and philosopher who lived from 1723 to 1789. The title is my poetic licence playing off the phrase "Don't hold back". This is actually the second poem I can remember I have written about him. There is another one somewhere in this thread.
Here is the wiki article I drew my inspiration from.
https://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Baron_d%27Holbach
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Hot And Cold Fascism, By Brian37(aka Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
The fridged glaciers
Have no compassion
For the land
They carve into
The eon's knife
Cuts the skin
Chasms hidden
A creeping debut
The equator's fire
Has no desire
Kilauea cares not
One ounce for you
San Andreas
Will always shake us
Crust violently thrusts
No care for us
On that frozen lake
The risk you did take
Cracks in the ice
Cold watery grave
One day while camping
In the tinderbox forest
Your ciggarette lit
Wildfires so torrid
Inhalation
Became emancipation
The drought you caused
Lungs filled with devistation
Your firy bombasity
You're icy and nasty
Nature has an excuse
But Goebbels' noose
Is choking the life
Out of our Republic
Strangling reason
And rule of law
Frozen it seems
Our species dreams
Repeat in a cycle
Of fascist extreems
The flames you impassion
To mask your corruption
You falsely play victim
And that's how you trap them
You damned well know
That warrant was legal
Put law enforcement in danger
Your lies are evil
The cult leader's religion
Verglas and glacia
Burn it all down
A golf course you placed her
Disposible lighter
The styrofoam cooler
Polluting the minds
They defend your conquests
Your rally cry inferno
You must bomb London
Christian Nationalism
Incendiary abandon
From the Caspian
To the Black Sea
In want of red state Caucuses
You have designs on thee
You call us Stalin
Barbarosa you're calling
But we know it's failing
Two wicks you are burning
The same candle
The toddler is frozen
Over 400 times
The 5th you were pleading
The bellows spread embers
The tundra consumes them
Permafrost melting
Releasing the methane
Such unsavory distain
The enemy within
All a "false flag"
Calls to violence again
Smoldering and seething
Piercing frostbite decives them
Their teeth they are gnashing
Supercilious their ashes
The cubes in the tray
Will melt someday
The kiln of our oversight
Will not be diswayed
The Siberian husky
Hides in his Florida compound
Sparks of propaganda
He wants no truth to be found
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White Collar Crime, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet On FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You thief
Acausted patent
Undeserved status
Surreptitious keek
Gun loaded with threats
Of mythological beasts
The vacuous pretender
Brings flocks to their knees
The abusive spouse
Has you on a leash
His henchmen apologists
From the pulpit make decrees
The unmarked van
He leures you in
The bear claw trap
Doom sealed within
You had no shot
Cripled at birth
Were told you were broken
That you had no worth
Unless you genuflected
To the undeserved
The invisible transparent
Obvious con
The seventh day
You slavishly grovel
Sitting in the pews
Ignorance marvels
You've been fooled
Behind that curtain
That deceptive collar
Spews nonsense for the hour
The floral arangement
Surrounds the coffin
Used as a billboard
Of the deceased you know nothing
Get in that timeshare
Before it's to late
Give me 10 percent
On the collection plate
If you don't
It's a horrible fate
Eternal torture
Burning in flames
The Genesis is Phil
Jesus knows him well
Paradise he sells
And for this you fell
That evil wizzard
Pulls your leavers
Vilifies skeptics
Calls them decievers
He doesn't like
When you check under the hood
When you kick the tires
It makes him furious
So don't be curious
Know your place
Submit in silence
Your autonomy debased
Forget the neurons
In your brain
Forget your ability
To escape the insane
Every step you take
Sting's cosmic eye
Never relenting
Orwellian sky
So when your loved ones'
Meet their demise
The treat for you
Suffer through his lies
You're incapable of love
If a sycophant not be
If you accept being finite
Being reality
You take away his power
And his authority
You tear off his collar
If you want to be free
You are not broken
You are not evil
His blustery confidence
Is nothing but hollow
You never needed him
To get through dark hours
To mourn is natural
He has no real powers
(END)
I was watching a rerun of Family Ties. If anyone is familiar with it, there was one episode where Mallory's Aunt dies, and she gets mad at the pastor/minister, whatever, because he was just hired to give the eulogy but really didn't know the Aunt at all (as the plot goes).
I hate how an otherwise motif of compassion and wanting to identify with the empathy for others, gets spoiled by superstition, not just in a sitcom plot, but in reality as well.
I can totally identify with Mallory in getting angry because when my real adoptive mom died, the priest made me a hostage and used her death as a billboard, an advertisement when he really didn't know her at all, it pissed me off. Of course I didn't say anything, but I wanted to scream "NO ASSHOLE, THIS IS NOT ABOUT SELLING YOUR CLUB, THIS IS ABOUT HER, NOT YOU".
I was held hostage at my mom's own memorial service, and threatend with "Find God before it is too late" , HE LITTERALLY SAID THAT. That vile survility, insecurity and narcissism, on display, the emperor really had no cloths, and I couldn't say shit to him.
"But Brian, they mean well". No, they mean to sell. There is a double standard with theists in that we are, while rightfully expected, to zip our lips when it happens to them, and we are invited to their services, they get to talk about God all they want. But when an atheist suffers loss of a loved one, we are expected to listen to God talk, even then, even when it is our loss.
While watching the show when she confronted the holy man at the service I was cheering her on, not in a happy vengful context, but in "Yea, your observations are correct, the guy rarely if ever saw her aunt."
But with every good story trying to convey humanity's compassion, they screwed it up, by having her dad in the script, come up with some watered down excuse as to why it was ok. Mind you in reality, there really are times where you do have to hold your tounge and be kind with your words. But I do hate the hijacking and the false claim by proxy implication, that only believers can feel pain, and have empathy.
Mr Keaton, in the plot said he didn't believe in the "fire and brimstone" God, he did believe in a force that started everything. Thomas Jefferson had pretty much the same deist attitude too. But the unwitting pratfall with this bad logic, is that it unfortunately allows the insecure to mask themselves up as athority and sell false comfort even to the point when their logic is questioned, they will get violent defending it. Certianly not all, but far too many.
I was crying for Mallory watching that episdode, because it made me think of all the good times I had with my real mom, and feeling vulerable and alone when she died. Even to this day, I sometimes cry out to my mom, not in any real belief that she is anywhere still, but sometimes in the feeling of vulnerability when she was always my rock and support. But Mallory's rightful skepticism and observation that the preacher didn't know her got ruined for me beause it alienated me when I felt disloged from the inclusion beause of the interjection of superstition.
This is yet another reason why I constantly argue that our behaviors are not dictated by our clubs or labels, and that our species ability to display great compassion, and unfortunately also great cruelty, are behaviors are in our evolution, and that is where the real overlap and understanding comes from.
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Cover Blown, By Brian37 (AKA, Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on Twitter)
When my bones ache
And I feel I can't walk
I turn on old music
From my High School halls
But then I see adds
With kids singing in back
To Crazy Train
How can you be sad?
Citizens of the world
Adam sang loud
Freddie's anthem
Generations of all
How could you not
Beat on the brat
Yee knows so well
How to give em hell
Cornelius can tell you why
The Eagles still do fly
Bridgers makes it matter
Many decades later
Just what you needed
Is to be knocked out
Your car has been modified
With a hip hop beat
Your abstract face
It it's Idol to deny
Olsen's cover
Will find it's way
You want some Hot Stuff
In the summer
Disco turned into metal
The pigs are the winners
Drink some Briandi
Where we belong
The old is reborn
And continues on
Francis is why
There is plenty of supply
Airing out the notes
Shelf life he defies
Hand down the music
Let the future hear it
Let the youth enjoy it
Let generations share it
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Cover Blown, By Brian37 (AKA, Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on Twitter)
When my bones ache
And I feel I can't walk
I turn on old music
From my High School halls
But then I see adds
With kids singing in back
To Crazy Train
How can you be sad?
Citizens of the world
Adam sang loud
Freddie's anthem
Generations of all
How could you not
Beat on the brat
Yee knows so well
How to give em hell
Cornelius can tell you why
The Eagles still do fly
Bridgers makes it matter
Many decades later
Just what you needed
Is to be knocked out
Your car has been modified
With a hip hop beat
Your abstract face
It it's Idol to deny
Olsen's cover
Will find it's way
You want some Hot Stuff
In the summer
Disco turned into metal
The pigs are the winners
Drink some Briandi
Where we belong
The old is reborn
And continues on
Francis is why
There is plenty of supply
Airing out the notes
Shelf life he defies
It won't bring me down
To hear this ELO gem
Anne told us once more
Too get off the floor
Hand down the music
Let the future hear it
Let the youth enjoy it
Let generations share it
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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At What Cost? By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Laramie, Cody
Sheriden, Riverton
Saratoga, Lusk
I ask at what cost?
You won the battle
But won't win the war
Even though she is
Exiting out the door
You are angry
At her scrutiny
Fasley accuse her
Of party mutiny
Was it her brass
Her demanding facts
Are you scared of the truth
That dear leader is through
That she stood up to him
Sacraficing her win
Puting her nation first
Instead of one man
What's wrong Cheyenne
She won't join the klan
She wont drink the poison
And do his bidding?
She will leave office
Some things more important
Like oversight and accountability
Not blind loyalty
At what cost
I don't think you know
The damage he's done
By convincing you so
Your freedoms attacked
Only he can save them
But she's the real hero
And won't give in
Her megaphone
Will travel with her
Outside of her office
With unwavering tone
And with every bone
She will make it known
He's not who you think
A house of cards his throne
Buford, Casper
Moorcroft, Pine Bluff
It's of his corruption
She said, "That's enough"
He think's he is tough
May like to play rough
But when he's faced down
He ends up the clown
You want to know courage
Well, you just lost it
At what cost Wyoming
It's his scourge you're supporting.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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The Serpentine's Mirror, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
They cant see your writhing
Your coils and venom
Blend in with surroundings
Your toxin within them
You brave mongoose
I've heard your battle cry
You think you're battling the cobras
But in reality you are the cobra
Your slithery body
Scaly autocracy
Protecting loyalist kin
But not our pluralism
The Serpent on high
Is the same guy
And we are the pawns
His body wraps arround
Slithers into
Indocrinated youth
Selling intollerence, arrogance
Theocratic domanice
Wrapped in a flag
Holding weapons of war
You were never a leader
Anyone should want for
So deceptive
Black rattle on yellow
Of orange cult
You now bellow
Coil up
Spring and bite
Kill their neurons
Make them blind
To the fact
It's all in their mind
God is the Serpent
Of the same line
It is the mirror
Of human insecurity
The snake of ignorance
Generation's missery
Rikki was no hero
Neither is God
Patriarchal masculinity
And all are a fraud
The cobras are innocent
Minding their business
And only fight back
When we disturb them
The Serpentine
Is Impirialism
The age of kings
Must come to an end
The cosmic boss
Is the python
Suffocates your reason
Until all breath is gone
Do his bidding
And you'll be fine
Dare to question
On you the python will dine
The real serpant
Is that of your mind
The fear of being finite
Hung in the loop of a bight
King Ghidorah
Cerebrus, Medusa
Jesus and Yahweh
Battling Allah
The family of cobras
Futile fight over entiltement
Indiana's torches
Won't contain them
Mesopotamia
The Serpent's soil
If to blaspheme
Makes their blood boil
To value our species
All must recoil
And revile
The Serpentine's mirror
To see ourselves
Living on the same home
No way to separate
Learn to get along
Defang the bad players
No matter the labels
No matter the borders
No matter their coils
See their patterns
As they try to blend in
Sell you the poison
Of religious tribalism
Not MLK, not JFK
Not Reagan, not Lincoln
Would let the King Snake
Commit such treason
He is not Paine
He is not Madison
He is not Washington
He is not Jefferson
He is the God
Who bullies you
He is the Serpentine's mirror
That dwells within you
Because that is the King
Depicted in that book
He is your disire
To rule over others
(End)
This poem is about where the real sorce of God belief is comming from. It is basically our own species fear of being finite, our insecurities, which manifest into narcissism, and is used to justify dominance over resources and others.
We are a social animal, and we form different groups and compete for resources. "God" is the manifistation of human ignorance. No, I do not mean theists are dumb or always evil, but in that "God" as a character in a book goes, is not a the benevolent being people like to interpret him as such.
If one is to claim he created everything, then that means he created Lucifer who is Satan, who is the Serpent. How could such a claimed being of benevolence create such a vile snake. Because we are the snakes when we disire to dominate others instead of treating them as equals. We create these cartoonish heros in our heads, but they are not heros, they are the dark side of our species psychology.
God and the Serpent are the same being, just as humans are capable of both great compassion and great cruelty, and our loyalties to our fellow humans are contitional, and transactional. The evil in that book is that it promotes tribalism and gets humans to forget that we are not different, we are not separate from each other.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Not Of Want, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
If you are
Not of want
Why am I here?
If you are
Omnipotent
What would you need?
If you are
Omni benevolent
Why do I bleed?
If you are
Omnipresent
I have no privacy
If you are
Not of want
Why am I here?
Is it love you need
Need is a want
So perfect you're not
I am not
Your creation
You are just imagination
Want is a deficet
It is to be filled
To be complete
If you are perfect
You are not of want
I should not be here
Not me, not anyone
Not the planet
Not any life
You are the nightmare
Sold as a dream
Your name they scream
And rattle their fists
Unsheth their swords
Of want to eviserate for their Lord
If you are
Not of want
Why am I here?
Am I in your ant farm
Obligitory obedient drone?
I don't think so.
(end)
WARNING...... I do not want any of my poetry I have ever written to be taken stupidly by anyone as advocating lawlessness, or physical harm to theists. My poetry in context of all my work, is simply sketpism attacking bad logic. It isn't a call to outlaw religion. It isn't a call to oppress beleivers. It is just blasphemy and criticism of bad logic. It is my sincere hope that more humans grow to accept our common existence, and our ability to cooperate and be compassionate, and at a minimum, stand up against all forms of attempts at autocracy, fascism and theocracy.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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SHIT, as much as I try, I cannot get my spelling perfect all the time.
Red line or not. So my apologies for my spelling, sometimes it sticks because adding a new post prevents the prior post from the ability to be edited.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Heads up before you read this poem. It is based on a German movie called "Die Welle"(2008) or "The Wave" but "wave" in the context of the movie is a "salute" which is a metaphor in the movie for the Nazi salute. The move is a warning to the younger generations not to assume it cannot happen in your lifetime.
If I had my way, I would make this movie manditory in every American civics class and a requirement for all the GOP sycophants who are blindly kissing Trump's ass.
Some of the language in the following poem will sound mispelled, even outside my real malady, but some of them are words I am borrowing from the German language. IE "Die" does not mean "dead" in German, "Die" in the context of the title is pronounced "Dee" as in "The" and "Welle" means "Wave". If you watch the movie, you will know in the context of the movie, "Wave" really means a "Salute" to the leader, and respect for the autocrat.
I really do recommend anyone reading this to watch "Die Welle" it is a damned good warning to never assume that it cannot happen where you live, or that your free society cannot fall. Too much conformity and demands of blind loyalty will always lead to the downfall of a free soceity. I will not spoil the plot for you if you have not seen the movie.
And no Trump, you are not the victim, you are the bully, you are the person the makers of that movie warn about, that Orwell in 1984 and Animal Farm warned about.
Autokrat, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
It creeps in slowly
The carasmatic man
Leads the high school kind
Innocent have no hint
1918 you were humilated
They left you to rot
With no jobs and no food
The no name runner, up to no good
Teach them they are the victim
Teach them you are the savior
Teach them social injustice
Give them uniforms, teach them comformity
Teach them disziplin
Do not let non party members in
Make them goose step loud
Herr Wagner will make them proud
Jedoch, Karo took great pause
Wouldn't fight for the cause
Her fliers the Valkyrie
Disturbed the water polo team
Denken Sie Daran
It can happen
When you are not looking
You buy what he's selling
Because you are desperate
Because you can't eat
Tired of the bread lines
Being dead on your feet
Herr Wagner the Diktator
Manipulated them
It was too late
He had sealed their fate
Karo is the man
In the famous Foto
Refusing to salute
Hitler she rebukes
Und this remindes me of
The Fotos of the dead
Suicides of great dread
Into the abyss they were lead
Stellvertreter Mayor
Ernst Kurt Lisso
And his family apically
Cyanide took them quickly
Not wanting to face revenge
Their own lives they did end
Und thus so did Tim
Shot Bomber his loyal friend
If Germany does not win
In that evil disturbed mind
In the bunker he so died
Taking 60 million lives.
Wir great when united
Brownshirts are now white
Uniformity, blind loyalty
Nacht is void of light
Cheney is Karo
Defying the party cult
Refusing to sell the big lie
Carfully listen with auscult
Die verrotten wir verboten
The rotton we forbid
Decapitate Mein Kompf's head
Fruede that he is dead
Let the artist paint
Protect the prose of the poet
There is no master race
And everyone should know it
The youth aways say
"I did not live back then
I am not to blame
It can't happen again"
It is the evil seedling
That grows into a sapling
Onto autokrat's rule
Don't become fascism's mule
It is the creeping hate
That slowly infects the brain
Their brains on your plate
Die welle is insane.
(end)
According to google translator, the German word for child is "kind" but the voice translator pronounces it as "kint" So the first stanza does rhyme.
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My parody of an ELO "Don't Bring Me Down", and no, ELO had nothing to do with my parody. .... Weisselberg brings down Trump. By Brian37 on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You got me busted I am doing time
You never ask me if I'm doing fine
You brought me down
No no no no no no
Trump Trump Trump
I'll tell the judge more under oath I just swore
I'll bring you down
My name is Weisselberg, IRS found your filings bat shit absurd
I'm telling on you you fucking fat orange turd
You brought me down
No no no no no
Trump Trump Trump
I'll tell the judge more under oath I just swore
I'll bring you down
Don't bring me down Trump
Don't bring me down Trump
Don't bring me down Trump
I'll bring you down
What happened to the billionaire I used to know
You left me swinging at the end of a rope
You brought me down
No no no no no no
Trump Trump Trump
I'll tell the judge more under oath I just swore
I'll bring you down
You're always getting into catsup fights
You're always breaking fine china plates
You're looking bad you're an orange douchebag
One of these days a jury is going to sink your glass
You brought me down
No no no no no no no no no
Trump Trump Trump
I'll tell the judge more under oath I just swore
I'll bring you down
They've got you shaken, you'll be running away
The FBI is after you every day
They'll take you down
Oh oh oh oh ohhhhhhh
Trump Trump Trump
I told the judge more under oath I just swore
I'll take you down! Down down down down down down down
I'll take you DOWN!
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Hope You Guess My Name, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
Rapacious, lecherous
Incidious, melevolent
Nepotistic, unrealistic
Infintile, futile, just plain vile
Hope you guess my name
The office defamed
Left in flames
Belongs in a cage
Aways enraged
Hope you guess my name
Compulsive, repulsive
Abusive, vituperative
Sedistic, heartless
Ruthess, remorseless
Hope you guess my name
The office debased
Secrets in boxes I take
My entire life is fake
Always on the take
Hope you guess my name.
Pitiless, relentless
Uncaring, offensive
Brutish, classless
Thoughtless, careless
Hope you guess my name
The office degraded
Intel I've hated
War heros berated
And lies I have stated
Hope you guess my name
I don't have to introduce myself
I'm the victim, and you're to blame
Pleased to con you
Thank you for playing my game
Smpathy for the criminal
Will make our Republic terminal
No cure will be available
Unless he's held accountable.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Warning In A Whisper, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
"Just squeeze the trigger"
A warning in a wisper
Melpo posionous mammal
Thalia was his ammo
His webbed feet
Playbill quick wit
Gut wrenching loves songs
Sock and Buskin
Clinical depression
Ineffictive medication
Psycholtic paranoia
History schizophrenia
Jeni it's got your number
It's gonna take your life
Jeni don't take that gun there
Uncastrated horse ended your strife
38 times
On the bathroom floor
Put it in your mouth
Couldn't take anymore
You brought laughter
To this dreary world
Got me through a breakup
Because of your standup
Damn the access
What shop let you purchase
With your mental health issues
NRA's worthless
Fuck you assholes
You took him from me
You took Playtpus Man
From his family
He needed care
Not a fucking gun
Sock and Buskin
With gun was taken
(END)
This poem is about my favorite comedian, Richard Jeni who killed himself by putting the barrel of a 38 Colt handgun in his mouth, and blew his brains out. His girlfriend Amy Murphy KTTV weather reporter and reporter found him dead from a self inflicted gunshot wound to the head with 38 on the bathroom floor. She he had reportededly heard Jeni whispering to himself "Just squeeze the trigger" weeks before he killed himself.
I was devistated as a fan when I heard the news. His standup act actually got me through a breakup. He had a bit about how he could not listen to love songs when he broke up with someone because it would make him depressed. That bit made me laugh so hard I choked on some orange juice and spit it out. It snapped me out of my depression because I had just gotten dumped myself. I wish someone could have caught him and talked him out of killing himself. He was a treasure to the standup comic world.
There had been an attempt to make his Standup show into a TV sitcom which failed.
https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/business/business-news/coroners-report-jeni-had-history-141338/
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Ode To A Redcoat , By Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
The turn of a nob
The gas was on
Your light extingused
The cut of of an onion
The fourth Thursday
In November
The main dish
Waddling skin
Babushka
You did yourself in
Samon colored
Hydrogen paroxide
The sabator
In your head
Lead you to the kitchen
Until you were dead
The tarnished balled
Silenced within
I'd have been on your side
Had I lived back then
Without your words
I'd have given in
A rope, a pill, a gun
My live would have been
Much more colorless
Much less discriptive
Much more isolation
Much more discontent
But your topic
So disturbing
Dark reaches
Of desperation
Damn that knob
Damn that knife
Damn that gas
For you goodnight
Mother's pills
Under the porch
Your first attempt
Did not work
Did you have the "courage"
To slash your legs
Did the electroconvulsive thearapy
Make you brave
Hands at two and ten
It was yet another attempt
Into a river arround a bend
Off of the road you drove in
You wet the towels
Sealed the room
Turned on the gas
And sealed your doom
The final time
You succeeded
Left Nicholas and Frieda
Lonely and grieving
It was in London
In 1963
The 11th of
February
Vivid your prose
Using Redcoats
Discribing a cut
That of your thumb
(end)
This poem is an ode to Sylvia Plath, whom unfortunately took her own life by sticking her head in an oven and breathing the gas. "Cut" is the only poem of her's I can understand. I love the vivid metaphore of discribing cutting her thumb. It is a must read for all poetry lovers. It is just sad she suffered depression and ended her life like she did. She was a treasure to the world of literature.
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Oblivion's Muse , By Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
Swing my leg over
Straddle that railing
18 stories down
I was thinking
I't would be quick
The theory would take
Seconds to impact
Splattering pumpkin
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
Jackson Pollock
All over the sidewalk
Crimson and blue jeans
Bone white smithereens
A morbid Jambalaya
Succotash mutton
Sausage links
Large and small intestine
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
That same year
I visited a freind
In a condo he saw
Through a window
He heard a scream
Looked out the window
A woman falling
A man did follow
What if they, they did
What if they, they did
What if they, they did
What if they, they did
More recently
A decade or so
The following happened
To a buser I know
One day to work
She did not show
And for a few years
I did knot know
Where did she, where did she go
Where did she, where did she go
Where did she, where did she go
Where did she, where did she go
Why she skiped work
And lost her job
But when came back
I understood
She came for lunch
But I didn't recognize
She had gained weight
I'll explain why
She was a witness, a witness to what
She was a witness, a witness to what
She was a witness, a witness to what
She was a witness, a witness to what
Two days before
She didn't show up
Her cousin in the driveway
Used a gun
Discribed with her fingers
She tapped them together
Then suddenly seperated
And expanded them
A witness, a witness to horror
A witness, a wintess to horror
A witness, a witness to horror
A witness, a witness to horror
Like an explosion
She uttered "pow"
The back of his head
Sneazed and bled
Skirting the bridge
Surrounded by nets
Yellow call boxes
Avoid cement splashes
Alcatraz
The prisoner's fate
To escape from the pain
I think of my wake
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
What if, what if I
Swing my leg
Straddle that railing
18 stories down
I was thinking
You Jackal
Hyena laughing
Pushing prodding
Tempting
Into oblivion
Butterfly collop
Antecubital fossa
Wrist down the forearm
What if I swing my leg
Straddle that railing
18 stories down
Into oblivion
Piercing fear
Just leaning over
Looking down
Survival took over
Don't hold it in
Not now not ever
Talk to someone
Don't think it's over
Harlot muse
I will refuse
To let you win
I am continuing
(end)
In light of thinking of Sylvia Plath's death, and writing a poem about her life, I thought about my thoughts of suicide and how so far, I managed to avoid going all the way. It isn't easy, I got severely depressed ever after my late mother died, and for two months just about every day I was thinking of ways to end it all. This poem reflects my feelings on sucide and fear of dying from suicide and my hesitation. I had one very scary incident however brief, where I looked over the edge of a balcony 18 stories up, and thought "what if", and it freaked me out so much, I have been afraid of open heights ever since.
But I have thought of other ways too. I just never have and for now, unless I am medically terminal I wont. But the feelings never go away in someone who has had a lifetime of coping with depression.
988 is a 24 hour suicide hotline. Do not hesitate to call if you need to.
https://988lifeline.org/?utm_source=google&utm_medium=web&utm_campaign=onebox
And
https://afsp.org/suicide-prevention-resources
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In "Ode To A Redcoat" two posts above, I used the word "live" and I meant to use "life". But once you type a new post it takes away your ability to edit the prior post.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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The Bane Of Bethany, By Brian37(AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on Twitter.
You so boast of
Lives that of a feline
Beating the reaper
That many times
Oh such a bragart
Now unaware
Incabable of being
Aware
Where is your comfort
In fancying yourself
That fictional mircle
4 days out
Your third time?
With six more
To go
Where?
You finally got it right
Being your own Doktor
The gas put you under
You made your own chamber
Why did Lazerus
Get stuck in your mind
Did you think they could save you
Every single time?
Now where are you
How do you feel
How can know
I'm influenced by your prose
I suppose
I could take the same road
Make useless
My flesh and bones
But I do not know
What tomorrow holds
You're long since gone
Incapable of concern
Out of the ashes
Of your demise
I write these words
To stay alive
Beware of the hints
Those made by friends
Take not for granted
The finite time you have
I'm so sorry Plath
I wish I could have met you
I wish I could have convinced you
To bust that bane of Bethany
But no, to my sorrow
Long lost many tomorrow
You could have had longer
The cat's luck ran out sooner
It was no art
Grim to the core
The scars dying embers
The living remember
The snoflakes December
For the smokestacks no slumber
The ovens outnumber
The sign on the gate everyone's fate
You worked and toiled
Putting pen to paper
Exposing life's wounds
Now always free
Such pus scabs
Break my crepey skin
You've rendered useless
Neosporin
Now there are many
Who identify with
The pain of the Lady
That dwelled inside.
(end)
Another ode to Sylvia Plath and her Poem Lady Lazerus. She was discribing herself as having survived her suicide attempts and how people reacted to that as "miricles" like Jesus raising "Lazerus" from the dead after 4 days. It is frustrating to see the likes of such briliant minds, and those of others such as Robbin Williams and Anthony Bourdain take their own lives for whatever reasons. Unfortunately suicide is part of nature. It is always great when we can talk someone out of it. But regardless, do not get angry at them, or judge them, or blame them. Mental health and or physical health should not be stigmatized or vilified.
Her words still live on, and despite many a dark topic, she is still so relivant today in regards of facing our nation with the harsh reality that we do a shitty job taking care of the mentally ill. No, don't worry folks, I am not suicidal right now. But I have had those thoughts a few times in my life. Her words, as dark as they are, also made me want to give her a hug an tell her that I could identify with her suffering from depression.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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The Twitch Of Daddy Longlegs, By Brian 378 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
They swabbed your gums
With morphine to numb
From days to mere hours
Within minitues succumbed
It wasn't a pucker
Not a last kiss
Like the daddy longlegs
Your nurons made twitch
Both hemispheres gone
And all that was left
The cerebelum and brain stem
I witnessed your end
They swabbed your gums
With morphine to numb
Last desperate jailbrake
Your neurons tried to make
And the last motion
Was that in your face
Your lips were twitching
Puckering for breath
Slowly fading
Then no more motion
It was the end
Your lips stopped moving.
(end)
This poem was about my late mother's death. It was horrifying to watch, and I wouldn't wish it on anyone to see, even peaceful slow death, like hers in a nursing home. She had been in pain for weeks, and on her final morning, she wasn't speeking, but she was still breathing, her eyes were not open. Then that vile death rattle the hospice nurse and staff warned me about. But regardless of the process they told me about, you can never be prepared.
But just minutes before, I could tell that her face was changing, and I knew her brain was shutting down. Then the last bit of motion, was just in her lips, twitching and puckering and the final desperate nurons telling her to breath, then that horrifying cold dead lack of motion. It was like watching the leg of daddy longleg's leg twitch then stop moving.
I hope nobody reading this has to witness death, but if you do have the time in a terminal situtation, it is of great comfort to the dying and as painful to watch, I couldn't not be there.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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IGNORE THIS POST DITTO MISTAKE!
The Drams Of Mr. Smythe, By Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You sly sheep
White face, black wool
Bartholomew top hat and cane
Sweat drams for two
This marrage
Between you
My liver their child
Breast fed by Madea
I could not resist you
One for each hand
Mom used to say
Two giant bottles, one every day
You slowed me down
Quite in a jiffy
Drank myself to j
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THIS IS THE LAST DITTO, THE NEXT POEM WITH THE SAME TITLE IS THE CORRECT AND FINAL VERSION.
The Drams Of Mr. Smythe, By Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You sly sheep
White face, black wool
Bartholomew top hat and cane
Sweat drams for two
This marrage
Between you
My liver their child
Breast fed by Madea
I could not resist you
One for each hand
Mom used to say
Two giant bottles, one every day
You slowed me down
Quite in a jiffy
Drank myself to j
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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The Drams Of Mr. Smythe, By Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
You sly sheep
White face, black wool
Bartholomew top hat and cane
Sweat drams for two
This marrage
Between you
My liver their child
Breast fed by Medea
I could not resist you
One for each hand
Mom used to say
Two giant bottles, one every day
You slowed me down
Quite in a jiffy
750 millilters
Drunk until jaundice
Below my right ribcage
It started to rage
Against my hobby
Put me in my place
The first three letters
Cut me off
No longer would let me
Buy any of
Oh Washington
I tried to Rebel
But I taxed myself
Without your help
Blackend wool
The tuxedo's fool
Peanutbuter whiskey
Made me drool
You fucking bastard
You were my friend
I depended on you
Almost met my end
I shouted at night
Disturbing 2nd floor
Disturbed the waiting lobby
Outside the E.R.
And just what was
My grand reward
Lactulose and diarrhea
Messing hospital beds
Deadly ammonia
It was of to rid
You gave it refuge
In my blood
That was your breastmilk
I was the dog
You put the pill in the peanutbuter
I took the swig that you did never
Emily my dear,
You are so clever
I was a reall Tippler
Traitor to my liver
I used not a tankard
Just a small shotglass
It's not that much
Repititiion did last
That disgusting yellow
Too blind to see
It slowly creeped in
Took control of me
Sunken cheeks
Shuffling feet
Hospital bedpans
In plastic urinals I peed
I was decived
Debauchee shaped me
Dew did me harm
I could not see
I was not alarmed
The Seraphs in costume
Two masscots my tomb
My liver their womb
No Foxgloves for me
I was a busy bee
The liquor I tasted
Not brewed by the sun
I drank Marion
Under the table
I burned down your tavern
There was no medallion
(end)
(Disclaimer: This poem is merely poetic license and in no way is meant as a disparagement of any product. It merely discribes addiction and fighting it. )
This time an ode to Emily Dickenson, who's poem was about getting drunk on life. Not the case for everyone though.
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Thank God There Is No Afterlife, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet On Facebook and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
I asked you for Trae Crowder
You threaten me with Foxworthy
To stand in front of my mourners
To read my poetry in eulogy
My first goal
Before I go
Is to convince the president
To nuke your home
Say goodbye to Norman
The Sooner the better
If banjo I'm warning
You've sullied my ears
Nothing's sacred to you
Desicrated ABBA, Metallica
And the Ramones too
AC/DC
On banjo
Foxworthy ready
To make your move
Thank God for you
There is no afterlife
My wake I'd be haunting you
All through the night
Shall you die before me
Return the favor,
And torture thee
If I give your eulogy
You kicked Allison
Out of your house
I'll say you loved Andy Griffin
Instead of Griffith
I'll correct your pronunciation
It's "Sausalito" not "sultry"
It "potato" not "taters"
It's "video" not "viddddeeeaaa"
And no John
I will never, never
Ever, ever, ever
Pass you the Jelly!
It's "All Fruit" you bastard!
(end)
John loves Allison Krauss.
This is a poem about my best friend John who has a thick typical "redneck" accent, and loves banjo music and country music. So he constantly teases me that if I die first he will get Jeff Foxworthy to read my poetry at my wake and play my favorite bands on banjo, such as Metallica and Abba and the Rammones. I love the guy in all reality, and in all seriosness, if he did not roast me at my wake, I really would be pissed at him.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Two Mugs Of Milk, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB/META and @brianrrs37 on twitter)
It was your last act
Of kindness of fondness
Thinking of them
Before your end
Damn it Ted
Why, WHY WHY WHY
Did you leave her
In the cold grasp of winter
You saught out another
And that's where you left her
Bitter in anger
In a madman's era
Would it be different
If you were alive today
Not stuck in your rut
With a man's boot on your neck?
Holding you back
You'd have no restraints
You'd been long since publsihed
In your voice defiant
You'd be self reliant
No need to be envious
Of the frat boy mentality
Networking bullshit male authority
You trunkated, vacated
Equal you wanted to be treated
You felt defeated
The mugs you conceded
Your last act
I read and react
You'd be my mentor
My oasis, my solice
Master wordsmith
I am but a moth
To your extinguished candle
I will always be drawn
I can never meet you
At least not in this arrow
I wish quantum theory
Could let me greet my hero
And tear down that tape
And leave the mugs on the shelf
Milk in the fridge
Don't kill yourself
You will always be
On my breath
Every day
Until my death.
(end)
I am on a roll now. I just read the following article about her life and the last morning Sylvia Plath was alive. According to the following link, the account says that her last act was leaving out milk for her kids, and insuring the gas would not leak out of the room and hurt them. I literally cried reading that just now. I have always felt I have fallen short and felt displaced and out of place, and enveous of others constantly. And she really was a true wordsmith in every sense. I now currently have 3 poems of hers I absolutely am blown away by, and will be reading more to see if I can undersand more of her work. I was for a long long time, stuck on one poem, "Cut", and intimidated by the rest of her work, but that was long ago, and tonight, I forced myself to read more and the analysis of each. And the lightbulb went on in my head, and I figured them out. She can never know the extent of her impact on the literary world this far out from her suicide.
I know that all memories fade, and our sun will expand and fry our planet, and nobody will be remembered. But as long as I am alive, I feel some obligation now to her memory, to keep her name alive and spread it to more people whom did not live back then, and expand her lesson of both life and death and gender roles and her mental health as well. I want her name to live as long as possible in history. I know lots of authors have and are doing so with much better resources than I. I am humbled by her words, her complexity, her insightfulness and imagery.
I really wish it were a different universe, a different arrow I was in, in some parallel universe, where even just as a friend, to meet her at the poetry group I used to attend in Northern Virgina back in the late 80s through the mid 90s.
You're still alive Sylvia, nine lives is a drop in the bucket for you.
https://lithub.com/on-sylvia-plath-and-the-many-shades-of-depression/
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